8 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2008 06:47 pm Title: Chez Miff
lol that was really cute, I can see Jim being all dorky like that, and with a totally serious look on his face aw!
Date: May 23, 2008 08:58 pm Title: Chez Miff
No grammar/spelling errors. I would have seen. ;)
Loving it so far! Reading on...
Date: October 24, 2007 08:22 pm Title: Chez Miff
Azlin, this was really lovely. Nice work! I laughed when I saw your end comments for the first chapter about noticing grammar errors. You should know from beta-ing my stuff that I wouldn't dare comment on that! ha ha
Author's Response: Yeah, but even the best of betas can miss mistakes in their own stuff. And I'm certainly not the best of betas. ;) I'm really glad you liked it though!
Date: October 13, 2007 03:03 pm Title: Chez Miff
It's like a screenplay...starring myself... :)
Angst is good by me :)
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Hahaha! I'll let you do the matching illustrations. How good are you at drawing soda cans? Enjoy chapter 4 it's all yours!
Date: October 12, 2007 10:57 am Title: Chez Miff
This line: "all he knew was that clearly it was going to take more than just some polite chit-chat to cheer her up" is perfectly Jim and Pam.
I love Chez Miff - awesome.
Does the last line mean the scene from the Merger? (Bad memories!)
Nice job. I didn't find any errors... I'll be reading in stages, btw. ;)
Author's Response: Isn't it great that they were already them even when they'd only just met? So perfect for each other. At least, they are in this story. Huh. Maybe someone should write a story where they don't hit it off. But they'd still have to go to Cugino's hm...this is intriguing...