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Reviewer: mirrorkate Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2007 09:19 am Title: Evolution

"Getting settled. That was a good way to put it. He was settling down his brain, his nerves, his heart." -- great line.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Those are the kind of lines that seem to sneak into even my fluffiest stories, and I sometimes wonder if they're too out of place, so it's great to hear that you liked it.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2007 09:23 am Title: Evolution

Wow, I think this is my favorite chapter of all.  For me, you turned around the angst-fest of the Merger, by putting it in Jim's perspective at the time, and surrounding it with the "now".

Author's Response: You know it's funny, I hated Jim in this scene the first time I saw it because I just thought he was being so stupid, but the more I watched it, the more I became intrigued by trying to figure out what would make him act that way. So I think that's what inspired this version of the scene.

Reviewer: Grape Soda Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2007 04:16 pm Title: Evolution

Oh Jim, there's nothing wrong with grape soda :)

Another cute chapter- thanks for the dedication!

GS

xxx 



Author's Response: Yeah, good thing he figured that out, huh? I'm glad you liked this chapter, but if you're looking for cute, try the next three! Turns out happy!Jam is even more fun to write now that it's canon and not just fanon!

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