1 [Report This]Date: August 17, 2023 01:53 pm Title: Climax
I've only recently found this site and I'm so sad I that I didn't get to read along as these were coming out. This is a lovely story, would love to have seen where it would have ended up. Author def has a gift, none of their work disappoints 🩷
1 [Report This]Date: June 05, 2020 06:29 am Title: Climax
Hello. HELLO. This is the most BRILLIANT thing I've read in my ENTIRE LIFE, and I CANNOT BELIEVE that it is not finished. I CANNOT. It's... a crime. It HURTS. WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME. IT'S SO CLOSE TO GETTIMNG SOMEWHERE AND..... AAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!
On a more serious note though, just THANK YOU so much for sharing this!!! It's been such an incredible gift reading this story... You are so talented, and the way you portray them both is just out of this world. I feel like I'm watching the most well-written episode of the series. This is so damn rare, and so damn beautiful and... seriously I cannot thank you enough. You're amazing
1 [Report This]Date: February 21, 2019 07:23 pm Title: Climax
I know this is abandoned, but I would just like to say that I loved what little bit that’s here so much that I finally register just so that I could tell you.
I’m a big big fan of the season 3 era angst, and I feel like you’ve captured it here beautifully. If you ever decide to return to this fic, you’ll have a loyal reader in me.
1 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2017 05:59 am Title: Climax
I just have to join the chorus asking you to finish this someday. It's beautifully done and ends so much on a cliffhanger.
Date: May 06, 2011 06:58 am Title: Climax
askldjalsdj. I know this was posted a long time ago, and you're probably never ever going to read this but whyyyyy? why did you not update. I never read WIP's, but somehow this one managed to slip through the cracks.
Even though you're almost never going to update again, I still want to say thanks for an awesome first half of a story... and scream at you too
Date: September 07, 2009 11:08 am Title: Climax
wow! this story is so great! I love stories set in this angsty period of Jim and Pam's relationship. As much as I LOVE where their relationship is going now, sometimes, I wish we could get a little angst with them again. I know it's been awhile but I'd LOVE to see the next chapter! It's just starting to get interesting!
Date: December 24, 2008 09:30 pm Title: Climax
OOh yay! I'd just about forgotten about this one, but looky here, a shiny new chapter! Why the tension in Miss Beesley's apartnemt is palpable... I hope you stick to your promise of it not being a bajillion months before you update! And good luck with your first real job!
Date: October 06, 2008 10:28 pm Title: Climax
I usually try to avoid incomplete stories (I have abandonment issues) but the description on this roped me in. This was really great, funny and clever dialogue, and the UST is just tangible. I really hope you find the time to update soon. Remember:every time you complete a fic, a baby bird learns to fly and all the world's cans get recycled;-)
Date: September 22, 2008 08:14 am Title: Climax
Love it! Loved the dialogue between Jim and Pam!
10 [Report This]Date: September 22, 2008 07:06 am Title: Climax
i had compleatly forgotten about this fic, but i just re read it and am in love all over again. please update soon (er than last time at least) :)
Date: September 22, 2008 03:46 am Title: Climax
loved it i really hope there is more soon
10 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2008 08:46 pm Title: Climax
Yay, you're back!! I can't wait for the next chapter. :D
Date: September 21, 2008 08:04 pm Title: Climax
so good so good. keep goingg.
Date: September 21, 2008 07:15 pm Title: Climax
Oh yea! I can't wait to read more of this story!
Date: September 21, 2008 07:10 pm Title: Climax
You're alive -- and you wrote! A really good chapter. So happy to see an update from you and I love the way you're taking this story line. Looking forwar to reading more!
10 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2008 05:29 pm Title: Climax
It's so much fun to go back to this time. I like Jim and Pam pushing each other like they would do every day except with stakes that are like a million times more important. Love it!
Date: September 21, 2008 05:03 pm Title: Climax
Can't wait for the next chapter. It was great to go back and reread this gem. Adding it to my Favs!
Date: September 21, 2008 05:00 pm Title: Climax
Oh. My.
Beesly/Halpert Friendship 2.0 is full of the smart-assy-ness you've come to expect from BHF, but now, with even more sexual tension!
Thanks for updating this -- just a few more days to the SP, so I really hope you'll update more soon.
10 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2008 04:14 pm Title: Climax
How great to see an update to this story! You've drawn such a perfect picture of their awkwardness, their utter inability to correctly read where the other one is coming from, and best of all, the banter. I love the "Halpert/Beesly Friendship 2.0" and Pam's inner monologue in this chapter is so wonderful. Congrats on the new job, and I hope we see the rest of this story soon!
9 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2008 03:11 pm Title: Climax
The TENSION! Agh!! Great chapter.
9 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2008 02:28 pm Title: Climax
Just read this from start to finish, shan. I'm breathless! What an ending. You must continue soon. Such a buildup! Such tension! Needless to say, I'm diggin' it.
Date: September 21, 2008 01:52 pm Title: Climax
Wow, I'm floating on air after reading that last part. The tension you establish is so delicious. I can totally identify with Pam here!
I love the concept of the Halpert/Beesly Friendship 2.0. Poor Pam is trying so hard. They're so obviously into each other, it's so frustrating that they can't see it. I have a feeling that's about to change, though. Really looking forward to the next part!
10 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2008 01:47 pm Title: Climax
My heartrate was just as fast as Pam's (if not, more) when Jim pulled her down onto the couch. Wow that was exciting! I'm glad you're bringing this story back and I hope updates come fast! Oh and congrats on your first real job!!
10 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2008 01:37 pm Title: Climax
Whew! MAN was that worth the wait!!!!! Such sweet tension ... es delicioso!
I'm thinking 5 - 6 more chapters, myself! C'mon, you have it in you!
9 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2008 12:54 pm Title: Climax
Wow. The slow build here is killing me! You must update soon!!!!!! Great story! Exclamation Point!
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks, Desslok! I'm working feverishly on chapter 5. I promise it won't be another 11 months between updates!