Date: October 03, 2017 09:21 pm Title: The Setup
Talk about a cliffhanger! Pouting. A lot. Yes, somebody IS still reading your fics. I came to this party very late and I LOVE this. Hellllooooooooooo. Anybody there? Come back. (said in very pathetic whining and more pouting)
10 [Report This]Date: December 01, 2016 12:49 pm Title: The Setup
Looking for some Christmas fic and this is soooo good, the characterization is impeccable, dialogue felt like I was watching the show, you even got Dwight's voice down which is a challenge. Sad it's unfinished (that 4th chapter end, gah!!!) But still really good.
10 [Report This]Date: October 28, 2008 08:14 pm Title: The Setup
I just discovered this story, and I'm SO GLAD I did. Everything here is just wonderful, and I hope you update soon. THINK OF YOUR FANS!
8 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2008 03:44 pm Title: The Setup
Thank you so much for updating. This is such a great story it doesn't deserve to be left unfinished! I'm curious as to what Jim says to Pam. Will he put himself on the line again, or will Pam be brave or courageous enough to take a chance herself. Can't wait!
Date: September 21, 2008 01:39 pm Title: The Setup
I forgot ... congratuations on your new job!
Date: August 04, 2008 02:22 pm Title: The Setup
I just discovered this, and I've loved what I read. I really like your characterizations and dialogue. I hope that you come back and finish it off one of these days, because it's just getting good. I mean, it was already good, but it's getting gooder.
Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much! I've finally updated, if you're interested :)
10 [Report This]Date: June 10, 2008 11:20 am Title: The Setup
Oh, amazing post-benihana fic, I miss you so! Update? Please? Pretty please? ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! I finally, finally updated. Hope you like it!
10 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2008 04:11 am Title: The Setup
Oh you can't end there you just can't! Really love this and hope you update soon! :)
Date: October 31, 2007 06:06 pm Title: The Setup
the mark of how good a writer you are is being able to successfully transport us back into the angst of season 3, with all the magnificent dialogue and POVs and DWIGHT and the huuuumor! and daring!jim and assertive!pam and oooh, please, give us more, this is a thing of beauty. off i go to find your other stories. thank you for this wonderful series.
10 [Report This]Date: October 30, 2007 05:52 pm Title: The Setup
Shan21, you rock my world. This story is great! This is my first review I've ever submitted. I created a username just to beg you to post chapter 4. More angsty goodness, please!
Date: October 30, 2007 12:18 pm Title: The Setup
I'm not sure if I've reviewed this story yet but if not.... I LOVE IT! You capture Jim's thoughts perfectly, and I'm loving all this anticipation. That line, "we've gotta try out that sofa" or whatever it was gave me chills. Please update soon!
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2007 07:07 pm Title: The Setup
I really like where this is going for several reasons. First, although I love happy JAM I totally have a thing for the angst and you do it so, so good. Second, there wasn't that much ABC fic so I'm excited for this. Cannot wait for more!!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks kells! I was sitting here like, "What the heck is ABC fic?" I'm slooooooow...
9 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2007 07:06 pm Title: The Setup
Loving it! I feel so excitd with them. Great job.
More chapters soon??
Author's Response: Very soon, I think. I'll probably have chapter 2 up tomorrow :)
7 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2007 05:09 pm Title: The Setup
I wrote a nice review but my stupid new comptuer has a mind of its own and it totally disappeared. Basically I said I'm enjoying this even though S3 angst is not a place I like to revisit, but you write it so well that I just know it will be good.
Author's Response: Awww, stupid computer! ;-) Thanks kaystar, that is such a nice compliment!
Date: October 14, 2007 02:27 pm Title: The Setup
Just the kind of thing I LOVE. Angst.
Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I love angst too! Trust that it will get angstier :)
Date: October 14, 2007 01:46 pm Title: The Setup
Great set up chapter! I really loved that episode, especially the ending, so I'm excited to see where this goes now ;)
Author's Response: Thanks Jenn :) I hope you like what comes next.
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2007 12:48 pm Title: The Setup
love it!
Author's Response: Thanks, Donnelly!
Date: October 14, 2007 12:45 pm Title: The Setup
Loves it so far. I always wondered if the two of them would be waiting for Dwight at the bottom of the building. I mean it would be weird if they didn't wait for the pay off of their prank.
Author's Response: I completely agree, PC. Thanks for the review :)
Date: October 14, 2007 10:42 am Title: The Setup
“So, Halpert… where’s my present?” she asks.
Jim feels a sudden twisting in his gut, and he stutters for some sort of an excuse.
Gah! I also loved when Pam is teasing Jim about knowing Dwights number by heart. I love that this is what we don't see on ABC and can we just assume this is what happens? Please? :D And the ending? They've def. got to go now. Love it!! I'm so glad you're writing again shan! Let me know if you ever need help ;) Great job and I can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: Thanks WBJ! You know that I love any feedback that you give! I'll email you what I've got for chapters 2 and 3 to see what you think :)
Date: October 14, 2007 10:01 am Title: The Setup
So, I don't know that I ever fully expressed how much I love this plot. You have a great way of coming up with these scenarios that I (I'd guess most others as well, but you know what happens when you assume...) read and say 'YES! That is what was supposed to have happened next! The writers obviously just lost those last 20 pages or so.' You're doing a great job of keeping in character with the interaction that Jim and Pam had going on circa mid-S3. Just awesome. I can't wait to see the next part!!!
Author's Response:
I totally forgot to thank you and uncgirl for beta'ing! That is now corrected. Jeeze, I suck.
And thank you! I hate it when the writers lose pages!
Date: October 14, 2007 09:48 am Title: The Setup
Oh, this is so good, and I'm so glad it's not a oneshot. I like that they don't say much, and I especially like seeing Jim encounter Karen's 'you should date!' thing. And him knowing Dwight's number by heart? Excellent touch. Excited to see where it'll go.
Author's Response: Thanks Ardens :) When I was watching the episode I was just waiting for Karen to pop up and say something to Jim about Pam and Roy. But it didn't happen so I decided to make it happen. Hee!
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2007 09:44 am Title: The Setup
This is such a great start! The characterization, dialogue, all ring perfectly true. And I love the premise. I can't wait to see where you go with the rest of it.
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope when you see Dwight next chapter you think he's in character because I had so much fun writing him!
Date: October 14, 2007 09:40 am Title: The Setup
Very fun chapter! It's great to go back to these moments now that we know we have real live fluff to watch! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks! You should have chapter two tomorrow or Tuesday :)