Date: October 22, 2007 02:24 pm Title: Part Seven: The First In A Neverending Line Of Firsts
i love that this didn't end completely fluffy and sugary, ya know? Jim was awkward at first, just like i'm sure many dad's are the first time they hold their kid. it's comforting. it fits with the rest of this amazing piece of fic. :) great job!
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm not typically a fan of the syrupy babyfic. So I'm glad you enjoyed!
10 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2007 02:00 pm Title: Part Seven: The First In A Neverending Line Of Firsts
Awesome job!
10 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2007 12:58 am Title: Part Five: The First Hospital Trip
WOW! Amazing and HOTTTTTT!
10 [Report This]Date: October 19, 2007 02:42 pm Title: Part Four: The First Affirmation
Yay! You added the baby Flonkerton! Yesssss!
And as always you make me giggle with your descriptive terms...
"messy open-mouthed meeting of tongues and teeth"
Hee hee!
I'm lame.
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2007 11:59 am Title: Part Five: The First Hospital Trip
i am absolutely loving this story so far - its such a great mix of tenderness, angst, romance, and heat. great job!
Date: October 18, 2007 06:27 am Title: Part Five: The First Hospital Trip
that read like baby making sex for sure. It's always when you least expect it to happen.
Date: October 17, 2007 08:07 pm Title: Part Five: The First Hospital Trip
Wow, this story is amazing. Every chapter covers such a unique aspect of their situation, and the intimacy is wonderful.
Date: October 17, 2007 08:05 pm Title: Part Five: The First Hospital Trip
I just reviewed the last chapter, but can I just say how much I am loving this story? I am totally in love with it.
Date: October 17, 2007 08:04 pm Title: Part Four: The First Affirmation
Thank you thank you thank you for not doing the whole "will sex hurt the baby" thing in this chapter. I was cringing thinking that it was coming (no pun intended) and was so glad it never did.
Date: October 17, 2007 07:50 pm Title: Part Five: The First Hospital Trip
Aww, *sad face* But this: “I don’t know if it’s worse that I told you to rip my panties off, or that you actually tried to do it.” completely made up for it!
Date: October 17, 2007 07:02 pm Title: Part Four: The First Affirmation
Adorable. So sweet, my teeth ache! That's a compliment by the way...:)
Date: October 17, 2007 09:38 am Title: Part Three: The First Breakdown
This is already a great story!
PLEASE keep updating :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2007 08:23 am Title: Part Three: The First Breakdown
this was so hot, so sad, so sweet, so perfect. I really love your stuff. :) Hope Jam will make that baby soon. I squeal every time I have seen this story updated. Very excited for more.
10 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2007 06:25 am Title: Part Three: The First Breakdown
Whew! I'm going to take a nap now.
Date: October 17, 2007 05:59 am Title: Part Three: The First Breakdown
I can relate to this chapter having tried over a year for our first. sometimes you just need to let go and not think of baby making.
Date: October 16, 2007 09:28 pm Title: Part Three: The First Breakdown
You have a knack for combining hot sex with sweet emotion...hey, are you Aerosmith? ;)
Date: October 16, 2007 08:03 pm Title: Part Three: The First Breakdown
i've been reading a lot of your work lately, and i am a HUGE fan. this series is amazing, KEEP IT UP!!!
Author's Response: You mean you've been reading a lot of my smut lately. I'm kind of a one trick pony. But, I'm glad you enjoy. :D
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2007 07:53 pm Title: Part Three: The First Breakdown
Guh. Everytime I read and I want to leave a review, I CAN'T. It's just.. my brain is mush and I just. So, so, so very good, beruco, as always.
Author's Response: Thank you! I do try to turn as many brains to mush as I possibly can. It's what I do.
Date: October 16, 2007 07:44 pm Title: Part One: The First Attempt
this rocks and YOU rock. my god. every time i feel this cannot get any better, any more well written i am proven WRONG. i am so glad you've decided to write this, continue this. keep up the amazing work. excellent job so far, thanks so much for this.
Author's Response:
You are TOO NICE. Thank you for the ego-inflating review! :D
Date: October 16, 2007 07:36 pm Title: Part One: The First Attempt
Just as I was getting ready for bed... I pop my self over to MTT and look what is waiting for me.... another chapter. How sad that there is no baby for PB&J, yet.... but here to more trying. Somes when you least expect it... Keep up the great, amazing work!
H
Date: October 16, 2007 07:29 pm Title: Part Three: The First Breakdown
nice addition. I'm excited to see what you come up with next.
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2007 06:49 am Title: Part Two: The First Test
Steamy...so you know I loved it. Those crazy kids ; )
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2007 06:33 am Title: Part Two: The First Test
That was........wow
Date: October 16, 2007 05:41 am Title: Part One: The First Attempt
Wow I wouldn't have thought Jim would be so scared and Pam not. Must be FNB
Date: October 16, 2007 05:38 am Title: Part One: The First Attempt
Amazing job!!!! I say keep this going... so, please! :) H