Date: October 16, 2007 04:02 am Title: Part Two: The First Test
How adorable! I loved it. I usually avoid the "Pam & Jim are married" stories, but this was very sweet.
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2007 12:36 am Title: Part Two: The First Test
OMG!!! I love it!! So cute, yet quite hot!
10 [Report This]Date: October 15, 2007 11:24 pm Title: Part One: The First Attempt
Hi, I'm in love with this story. FYI. Smut and them being all Jim and Pam and alsdjfa. YES, PLEASE.
Author's Response: :D SWEEEET!
Date: October 15, 2007 11:18 pm Title: Part Two: The First Test
Well, heck, sex that good doesn't have to be about making babies, right? ;)
Date: October 15, 2007 11:14 pm Title: Part One: The First Attempt
Hee! Of course, all it takes is to make it a challenge. :)
Date: October 15, 2007 09:20 pm Title: Part Two: The First Test
ok, i love this. it's not just about the smut. although you write that well. :) it's about Jim and Pam and how perfectly you have captured their characters in this... task. hehe. they know each other so perfectly well. i love the shaved legs comment, the three years together, and the fact that SO much of their communication is NON verbal! it's happy and sweet, but also about real people two fictional characters that i love. :) great job!!!
Author's Response:
Wow. Thanks so much for this feedback! I try really hard to keep them in-character and to sort of develop their already great repertoire in to their future selves.
Anyway, I'm glad it comes across as fluidly as it is in my head. <3
Date: October 15, 2007 07:08 pm Title: Part Two: The First Test
Yeah, I just have a feeling that these two will have to work at this for awhile....hmmm.
Author's Response: Yeah. That would be conveniently smutty.
Date: October 15, 2007 07:03 pm Title: Part Two: The First Test
wow, even though this is something we'd never in a milion, billion years see on the show, it just fits perfectly. You've really nailed their voices! Can't wait for more!
Date: October 15, 2007 04:50 pm Title: Part One: The First Attempt
Is it bad to admit I hope it takes them many tries before they succeed? And that you chronicle all of them? Anyway, I like how Pam knows just how to turn it into a challenge - and something tells me Jim will be inspired to uncharacteristic diligence.
Date: October 15, 2007 04:08 pm Title: Part One: The First Attempt
Jam!Babies! YAY! And Pam jumping Jim to make them is even better ;o)
10 [Report This]Date: October 15, 2007 01:53 pm Title: Part One: The First Attempt
this is freaking brilliant. babymaking fic is sooo much more fun than babyfic. this is so, so perfectly in character. Jim overanalyzing ev-ery-thing, worrying about being good enough, etc. this is perfect. the gauntlet has clearly been thrown down. more soon please!!!!
10 [Report This]Date: October 15, 2007 11:03 am Title: Part One: The First Attempt
You may have just made me sorta kinda like a baby!fic. As it was smutty/fluffy awesomeness, not anything that included Daddy!Jim having smarmy tea parties with "his princess". Not that there's anything wrong with that... ;)
But this was wonderfully in character and fab!
Date: October 15, 2007 04:42 am Title: Part One: The First Attempt
Love this! I hope there's lots of trying here because you write that so well. This:
Yeah, I was watching SportsCenter and your mom came in wearing a pair of my basketball shorts and an extra large Dunder Mifflin t-shirt—Which, wow, so irresistible—and nine months later there you were.
made me laugh out loud and the ending is perfect! Jim warms up to the idea and, ahem, rises to the occasion when Pam lays odds on the outcome. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: October 15, 2007 12:27 am Title: Part One: The First Attempt
Man...this has the makings of a great story! Already you've included one of my fave elements...Jim and Pam make a baby! I never anticipated that Jim would get some stage fright in the midst of things there, but it was very believable. Keep it coming!
Date: October 14, 2007 10:52 pm Title: Part One: The First Attempt
So cute that Jim is worried about being a dad. Update soon!
Author's Response: Oh, Jim. He's bound to be a worrier.
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2007 10:31 pm Title: Part One: The First Attempt
Fantastic start. Looking forward to the rest of the chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: October 14, 2007 10:27 pm Title: Part One: The First Attempt
I love this story especially the banter between them
Author's Response: Oy, the banter. The hardest part of my job. :D
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2007 09:48 pm Title: Part One: The First Attempt
ok, i'm seriously loving this story! realistic, sweet, and smutty all at the same time. please write more!
Author's Response: There will definitely be more.
Date: October 14, 2007 09:40 pm Title: Part One: The First Attempt
Love, love, love. Especially this part:
“You’re pretty,” he whispered in to her hair.
“Oh, please. You’re already getting laid.”
Because it's just so them.
Author's Response: :D Thanks. I love when people get specific with things they like/didn't like about a story.
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2007 09:38 pm Title: Part One: The First Attempt
i really love this!!! its so beautifully written, so realistic, so wonderful. If there's more, I am very excited for it!! :)
Author's Response: There is more. And soon, probably.
Date: October 14, 2007 09:28 pm Title: Part One: The First Attempt
I am giddy over the idea of this fic. Lovely, lovely work so far, I'm so glad you've decided to write this!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're excited about it!
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2007 09:26 pm Title: Part One: The First Attempt
Well you know the best part of making a baby is trying soooo.....I am SO looking forward to reading about Jim and Pam trying. This has so much potential, and you? With the smut? You are so good at it. So, yeah, can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, there obviously has to be some smutty aspect to a story for me to take it on. :D