Date: August 30, 2009 09:00 pm Title: No Service
HA! you chose moses taylor hospital too! that's the hospital i'm using in my babyfic. ("it's too soon")
Date: August 30, 2009 08:58 pm Title: Payback
okay, i know toby has a thing for pam, but toby would NEVER do that. he's not actually MEAN.
Date: August 30, 2009 08:54 pm Title: The Last Day
..... why a scheduled c-section?
i know, not much of a review, but seriously. why?
Date: May 18, 2009 02:04 pm Title: Anonymous
AHHHHHH!!!! I have to know what happens next! Every cliffhanger I shake my fist!
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Date: October 06, 2008 06:46 pm Title: Anonymous
OMG!!!!
So intense!!!
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Date: October 06, 2008 06:42 pm Title: No Idea
It really is so good!
"probably banned from seeing your daughter because you sold crack to her friends or something" is my favorite line!
great work!
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Date: October 06, 2008 06:39 pm Title: The Last Day
YAY!
I love it so far and seriously can't wait for more!
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Date: October 06, 2008 02:33 pm Title: Anonymous
Are you gonna finish this one? I would love to read more!
Date: April 16, 2008 08:41 pm Title: Anonymous
Any updates soon that we can look forward to?
Date: March 03, 2008 12:30 pm Title: Anonymous
OMG you are so mean. I love it! Update soon please :)
Date: March 03, 2008 11:06 am Title: Anonymous
I like the description of the ambulance as a shaky room.
Date: March 03, 2008 09:30 am Title: Anonymous
omg, please update soon! I need to know how this ends!! He has to get there in time!!! Great job :D
Date: February 29, 2008 02:13 pm Title: Crash, Bang, Boom
Gah! They're gonna end up at the same hospital one way or another...
Lovely portrayal of Roy.
Date: February 29, 2008 07:03 am Title: Crash, Bang, Boom
oh wow...can't wait to find out what happened...but jim has to get there!!
Date: February 28, 2008 03:53 pm Title: Crash, Bang, Boom
That's horrible! How the hell is Jim gonna get to the hospital now? He cannot, and I repeat,cannot miss the birth of the JAM baby.
Torture with these cliffhangers I tell you, torture!
Author's Response: It's all part of the plan *laughs maniacally*. Thanks for the reviews!
Date: February 28, 2008 06:31 am Title: Alone
Please continue ASAP!!!! I can't wait too see how this car ride with Roy is going to turn out.
Date: February 26, 2008 07:29 am Title: No Service
I'm excited for more of this. And kinda sorta pissed at Toby. Come on, Tob, Pam's having Jim's baby and Jim's missing it? Booo. But good that his guilt finally won over.
Loved it! Excited for more!
Date: February 25, 2008 09:17 am Title: No Service
oh my gosh...so good...can't wait fore more!!
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Date: November 01, 2007 05:46 pm Title: The Last Day
can you please finish?? :)
Date: October 30, 2007 10:57 am Title: Payback
Oooh, Evil Toby! Nice. Looking forward to where you take this. :-)
Date: October 30, 2007 10:49 am Title: No Idea
Oh dear lord. I really like the split shower idea and Michael's desperate attempt to keep things fun.
Did you use a beta for this story? They can really help you clean up minor spelling and grammar issues and other typos. I'd be happy to assist if you need one.
Date: October 30, 2007 10:42 am Title: The Last Day
HA! I love the Pam/Michael relationship. And the fact that Jim would actually take Dwight's cock-eyed advice is spot on.
Date: October 22, 2007 03:20 pm Title: No Idea
oh my gosh that is awful! do you really think Toby would be that evil? ouch.
Date: October 18, 2007 06:03 am Title: Payback
Wow I can't see Toby being that malicious. Well...maybe.
Date: October 17, 2007 03:52 pm Title: Payback
That dick... I mean... what?
Great job so far, keep it up!