Reviews For Not a Dream
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Reviewer: pbandj4life Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 20, 2007 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 2

Well done so far. I hope she's okay! I love how he is always trying to play doctor, like asking her to take her temperature and asking her what medicine she's taken and when. So cute!

But poor pammy. . .

(she probably wouldn't want me to call her that. . ) :)

Reviewer: flonkertonxx Signed [Report This]
Date: October 20, 2007 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 2

i can't wait to see what happens (:

in my opinion, you should make the chapter longerr.

 bbut it's your story and i don't want to interfere (:



Author's Response: I'll definetly consider that! I guess I keep finding the right cliffhangers to stop at.

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