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Reviewer: mazzie Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24, 2008 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

i liked this :]

Author's Response: good!  thanks for the feedback.  i'm actually really into ryan now, i like writing him.  don't know what that says about me, but...

Reviewer: bebitched Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23, 2007 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh Ryan, you oblivious asshole. I do have a soft spot in my heart for Ryan/Karen though, so I can't be too harsh with him ;) Nice job with this, you really captured his mindset, especially with him still being nervous under it all with Karen near the beginning, afraid she wouldn't show up.

Author's Response: ryan/karen, huh? i definitely get that... i think they fit well, i just don't know how to write it (well, outside of drabble format). thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 23, 2007 09:26 am Title: Chapter 1

You wrote Ryan really well!  Good one!

Author's Response: i appreciate that - thank you. i'm just starting to get the hang of writing non-jim or non-pam... glad you liked.

Reviewer: sarbear13 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22, 2007 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really liked this.  Great job!

Author's Response: thank you!

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