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Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2008 01:36 pm Title: Fun Run to Local Ad

Nice.  I like Local Ad the best (Creed!), but also I like how you made Phyllis deliberately misspell 'Launch.'

I don't know if you want to mention anywhere that it's haiku.  You did a nice job fitting thoughts/scenes into that form. 

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: October 26, 2007 02:37 pm Title: Fun Run to Local Ad

So Phyllis misspelled launch on purpose?  Brilliant! These are fun. 

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26, 2007 01:30 pm Title: Fun Run to Local Ad

i love that your blip from local ad is about CREED! i really love all of these, it's pretty cool. they're some of my favorite moments from these episodes. Jan's feet on the train were seriously one of the sweetest things i've ever seen. i like this :) 

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