Date: January 02, 2008 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
This one, he thinks, who might be the one mothers tell their sons about.
This one.
Pam Beesley.
I love this. Made me tear up.
Date: October 27, 2007 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
You did so much with so few words here, I absolutely love it! Can't wait to see what you have in store :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm pretty pleased with the response so far. I'm working on the second part right now.
9 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2007 11:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooh, NICE.. SO lovely. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks. That means a lot.
9 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2007 09:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: October 27, 2007 05:37 am Title: Chapter 1
This is a promising beginning for a lot of reasons, but mostly I really like your narratorial voice. I can't quite put my finger on why, but something about your construction makes me think of Garcia Marquez. (That is a compliment, heh.) Anyway, I'm looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you for the positive remarks. I have to admit that I've never read anything by Garcia Marquez, but I'll trust that it is a compliment. :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 26, 2007 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, i loved it. Already...with such a short chapter, i'm hooked. :)
Author's Response: Thanks. I appreciate the feedback. I was a bit hesitant to post such a short beginning, but after a few re-writes, I decided to break up the story, rather than post it as a oneshot.