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Reviewer: Crystalized Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28, 2007 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 2

Awww, poor Jim is about to get CRUSHED.

Author's Response:

But how does he handle the realization?  That is what I want to explore in the final chapter.  I don't think he handles the news in the same manner as most guys would.

Reviewer: Sweetpea Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28, 2007 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 2

Uh oh.  Our boy's just about to be smacked in the face with The Roy Factor!  And he hasn't even had a chance to talk to Pam yet!  Congrats on your first story, Darb!  I loved both of these chapters - there's a very nice rhythm in your writing and I like Mark and Jim's exchange very much.  Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you very much.  The impetus behind this story was what if the thought never crossed his mind that Pam was engaged?

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