1 [Report This]Date: February 19, 2023 12:52 am Title: A Bad Idea
I think you nailed Angela's point of view, great work!
8 [Report This]Date: October 20, 2008 04:43 pm Title: A Bad Idea
What a great start, I love it already!
Date: October 06, 2008 11:46 am Title: A Bad Idea
“I have to go disinfect my cats’ eyes and remove the urine stains from my carpet,” ... Spot on Angela! Bravo!
Date: October 01, 2008 02:26 pm Title: A Bad Idea
“You cannot come home with me,” Angela finally said, trying to keep her voice even. “My cats have conjunctivitis, and I only have one set of goggles.”
If you wrote a ghost script to apply for a writing job for The Office, and this line was in it, you'd totally be hired.
Date: February 07, 2008 01:18 pm Title: A Bad Idea
Oh lord. I wasn't sure if I was going to review, but I have to now. How could I pass up the opportunity to quote hilarious lines back to the author? Like the one about Angela's frown deepening (in emotional intensity!) and her cats' pink eye and the goggles and Angela and Pam being 'girls' and nnnngggh. What fun!
Date: December 18, 2007 11:01 pm Title: A Bad Idea
and OMG!!! nerfherder? super kudos for bringing star wars into this! "who's scruffy looking????"
Date: December 17, 2007 03:54 pm Title: A Bad Idea
I lvoe how you began and ended with Angela's point of view.
You portray her so well!
And the interactions between her and Dwight were priceless especially the Babe Ruth ending.
And Jim listing off sins just to piss Angela off? Perfect!
Date: November 19, 2007 06:09 am Title: A Bad Idea
You are not alone, my friend...
Author's Response: Hahaha!
10 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2007 07:51 am Title: A Bad Idea
Shan, I'm wishing you a virtual gold star for your artistic efforts : ) GREAT chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks, Nan! shall proudly wear that virtual star :)
Date: November 12, 2007 12:56 am Title: A Bad Idea
i need to know what happens!
like...now!
such a great chapter!
keep up the good work...and soon please
Author's Response:
LOL! How about like... later this week? Unless you want to do my term paper? It's on the use of short stories and poetry as supplemental texts in content-area high school classrooms. Readysetgo!
Heh. Thanks so much for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: November 11, 2007 08:26 pm Title: A Bad Idea
I love love love love this story!! Please write more, and soon!
And your rendition of Angela's goggle fiasco made me giggle. *sighs and shakes head* Oh Angela.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it, PBS! More to come probably later this week :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 11, 2007 08:08 pm Title: A Bad Idea
Let's examine why this story is so damn good.
1. It has angst. And lots of it.
2. Angry, gruff-voiced hurting!Jim
3. Drunk!Pam
4. Kissing...lots of kissing!
5. Jim and Pam actually about to sit down and talk...really talk.
6. It's illustrated!
It doesn't get better than this.
Author's Response: LOL!!! Numbered and everything! Gold star, Chilis! Thanks so much :)
Date: November 11, 2007 07:40 pm Title: A Bad Idea
Okay that chapter was AMAZING [Kelly/]!!!!! WOW. I seriously got so caught up in it, I felt like it was so real and true to each of their characters, especially Jim's, you captured him perfectly. Looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response: I'm so glad it felt real! Thanks, nan :)
8 [Report This]Date: November 11, 2007 07:11 pm Title: A Bad Idea
Awesome chapter!! You must be channeling Angela! And this line was so funny - "And to do so by throwing herself at a mischief-making slacker in perpetual need of a haircut!"
Author's Response: Ha! Thanks! Heavy use of a thesaurus was helpful for writing Angela :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2007 04:13 pm Title: A Bad Idea
Oh...WOW.
Just... let me take a moment and collect my thoughts.
Whew.
Okay, first of all, will you forgive me for not reading this story until now? Can this be a "sin free zone" like Angela's car? (Possibly the funniest line I've ever read--literally guffawing out loud over here!)
I can't even describe how great this was. You write Angela so well it's a little spooky. Now I have to go read the next chapter! This definitely deserved the ribbon it's proudly wearing!
Author's Response: Lol, Mose I will forgive you. Consider the review box a sin free zone. (glad you liked that part!) I was definitely spooking myself out with the Angela POV. So much fun though! Just keep out a thesaurus of nasty, uptight words and you're golden!
Date: November 07, 2007 11:14 pm Title: A Bad Idea
"My cats have conjunctivitis, and I only have one set of goggles."
Quite possibly the funniest line ever uttered in a fanfic. FANFREAKINGTASTIC. Nothing better than an Angela POV on Jim and Pam. Rock on!
Date: November 07, 2007 08:40 pm Title: A Bad Idea
Oh, God, the GOGGLES! You do a great Angela. Excellent job, and I can't wait to continue.
Author's Response: Lol, the goggles seem to be going over very well!
Date: November 06, 2007 02:08 am Title: A Bad Idea
I didn't get to review this before but i LOVED this! Angela's thought were so in character and funny! I could definitley tell you enjoyed it lol. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks, Snoz. Hope you like ch2!
9 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2007 07:59 pm Title: A Bad Idea
I love that Angela is 90 lbs. and wears goggles to deal with the cats. This is soooo probable! Great story. Hope the woodland creatures are singing to you as you write the next chapter (where Jim does not take advantage of Pam but comes out like a knight in shining armour anyway).
Author's Response: lol, the woodland creatures sweetly scerenaded me as I wrote!
10 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2007 10:26 am Title: A Bad Idea
“My cats have conjunctivitis, and I only have one set of goggles.”
LOL... that got me... This is really, really good. I almost wish Angela could be the voice for the entire thing... almost. More!
Author's Response: I did quite enjoy writing that line :) Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2007 06:05 am Title: A Bad Idea
Ssooooooooo great!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: November 04, 2007 07:43 pm Title: A Bad Idea
Wow, this is just brilliant. You channel Angela so well that I'm a little bit afraid. "My cats have conjunctivitis and I have only one set of goggles." I would suggest that women everwyhere memorize that line and use it to shed any unwanted guys hoping to come back to their place. It would get rid of me in a hurry, I know that much. Of course if that didn't work, bringing up the Feline Idiopatic Cystisis would surely do it.
More soon, please.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm so glad people like my Angela stuff! I actually went onto a cat lovers' message board to find some weird disorder that a cat could have. It's also where I found out that some cat owners treat their kitties' pink-eye with a homemade saline solution. Heh.
9 [Report This]Date: November 04, 2007 05:29 pm Title: A Bad Idea
I thoroughly enjoyed this. yay!
Author's Response: I'm glad! Yay!
Date: November 04, 2007 05:23 pm Title: A Bad Idea
Oh this would definitely qualify for the best Dundies ever. Oh S2. How I loved you. Can't wait to see what else you have in store.
Hurry w/more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review xoxoxo. I'm a huge fan of yours, of course :) I'm typing away on ch2!
Date: November 04, 2007 04:16 pm Title: A Bad Idea
What a great first chapter! I really hope that you're able to update soon!
You did a good job with Angela and I enjoyed reading her take on the situation. The conversation she had with Jim was great too.
Author's Response: Thanks! I have some homework tonight, but I fully plan on pushing it off until 15 minutes before I have to leave for class and working on chapter two instead :)