Date: November 04, 2007 03:12 pm Title: A Bad Idea
This was an EXCELLENT first chapter. I love how you have the POV of Angela of all people to start it off, that was excellent and absolutely hilarious characterization. I cannot wait to read more!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks Lizzie! I'm working on chapter two right now, and I am *very* excited :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 04, 2007 02:58 pm Title: A Bad Idea
This was hilarious! So well written! You've got Angela down perfectly. I cannot wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: It was sort of weird how easily Angela's voice can pop into your head. A little scary, even. Heh. Thanks!
Date: November 04, 2007 01:39 pm Title: A Bad Idea
Oh my God, this is fabulous! I always wondered about that car ride home and now I don't have to wonder anymore! The goggles were hysterical and I can't imagine a more perfect Angela.
Author's Response:
What a nice thing to say! Thanks Sweetpea :)
Date: November 04, 2007 01:35 pm Title: A Bad Idea
I love the premise for this story and Angela POV has me LOLing all over the place. Keep it up!
Author's Response: I'm so glad I made you LOL! Yay!
Date: November 04, 2007 12:59 pm Title: A Bad Idea
You wrote Angela perfectly! Is the rest of the story going to be from her POV or do we get a peek into Drunk!Pam at Tortured!Jim's house? Update soon, I love it!
Author's Response: Wendy! I'm a big fan :) Thanks for the review. I think in chapter two you will get a bit of Drunk!Pam's POV in addition to some of Jim's POV.
10 [Report This]Date: November 04, 2007 12:57 pm Title: A Bad Idea
This:
“You cannot come home with me,” Angela finally said, trying to keep her voice even. “My cats have conjunctivitis, and I only have one set of goggles.”
is the funniest thing I've read in a long time. I loved everything about this. You do an amazing job when you peer back into little moments in previous seasons and find something there that could have happened.
Love it and hope for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I have soooooo many ideas for other S3 episodes, but now I want to explore S2 too!
I'm glad the goggles line is going over so well. I felt like such a dork, laughing to myself as I wrote that. I just imagine Angela puttering about in huge oversized safety goggles (she is the safety officer, after all)
10 [Report This]Date: November 04, 2007 12:24 pm Title: A Bad Idea
Eee! This is cute, I love the Angela POV!
Author's Response: Eee! Thanks so much! :)
Date: November 04, 2007 10:53 am Title: A Bad Idea
wow this is so Angela
Author's Response:
Yay! I'm so happy people seem to be liking the Angela POV! I may have to end this fic with an epilogue from Angela's perspective.
Date: November 04, 2007 10:34 am Title: A Bad Idea
Love Angela's reaction in the car and her warnings to Jim at the door. This is an interesting take on this episode and I'm looking foward to what happens next.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the part with Jim at the door, because it was a little tougher to write. Thanks for the review!
Date: November 04, 2007 10:32 am Title: A Bad Idea
i likee this a lott (: that was so angela. haha! i can't wait to read more soon!
Author's Response: lol, thanks flonkertonxx :)
9 [Report This]Date: November 04, 2007 09:53 am Title: A Bad Idea
Oh, I LIKED that and I'm really excited to see what happens next! Great job :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it.
Date: November 04, 2007 09:29 am Title: A Bad Idea
This is awesome! I can't wait to see where you go with it! I love that people are still writing S2 fic because it's so much fun, and you get to have them go from best friends to so much more than that.
Anyway, I loved Angela in this chapter. Nice job with her!
Author's Response: S2 fic is awesome. I've only ever written S3 stuff, but this is a fun little foray into a simpler (sort of) time. And don't even worry. They will absolutely become more than that :)
Date: November 04, 2007 09:25 am Title: A Bad Idea
I kept wanting to copy and paste my favorite Angela lines from this so I could include them in my review, but I realized quickly that I would end up copying the whole thing. You've done a marvelous job capturing Angela's disgust at just about everyone she knows. There's going to be a second chapter?! Yay!
Author's Response: Awww, thanks stampsgal! I really didn't expect Angela to be so easy to write, but it was great. Chapter 2 is plodding along. Jim is very excited/panicked right now :) I hope things are going well in the lounge!
Date: November 04, 2007 09:07 am Title: A Bad Idea
Well you've heard me say it before, but I adore this chapter. I think you have Angela just right and even though it has the trademark Angela harshness, it is so funny. I mean snicker all the way through funny. I really enjoyed this one and I'm so happy that you're writing again. :-)
Author's Response: You are the absolute best uncgirl! You know that though, what with our sharing a wavelength and all :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 04, 2007 09:06 am Title: A Bad Idea
Oh my god, this is so great! So funny without being contrived! Now let the woodland creatures sing. :)
Author's Response: lol, thanks! Great name, by the way!