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Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17, 2007 11:27 am Title: Baby Steps

AHHH i love you. I don't want this story to be over soon, though. Squee! is all that's going through my brain right now.



Author's Response: I love you too! Is that weird? Hee! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17, 2007 11:27 am Title: Baby Steps

Glad I realized you'd also posted another chapter today!! Two chapters FTW!!

I absolutely love this story; you've done such a good job building and maintaining the tension, and each character is so perfectly IN character that it's a blast to see what will happen next. Well done, well done. I've enjoyed every word.

And this: "I'm never going to be the one to end this," he recovers."    <<< That took my breath away. Literally. Wow.



Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you liked that line, Becky. I had trouble figuring out how to word it :)

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