Date: February 03, 2008 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love how a common theme is for Jim to worry that Pam's gonna think he's creepy for being so fixated on her for so long. I think its sweet.
Date: November 18, 2007 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
i'm SO SORRY i haven't been able to help you beta this! DANGG, i have not been able to near my computer since the play has been beginning run-throughs. and i'm not going to be home for christmas break, im visitng family. i will try HARD to come back to this soon!
Author's Response: Don't worry about it. Life can happen to anyone. Still looking forward to the next installments of your stories. Have a great Thanksgiving - ken
Date: November 18, 2007 07:52 am Title: Chapter 4
This is the second fic that I've read that has "I Wanna be Sedated"! I think it's the perfect "Jim" office song, and I love that you used it.
Lovely story!
Author's Response: Yeah, it does seem strangely appropriate. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: November 12, 2007 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ten Dundies to you for shouting out Leonard Cohen's "I'm Your Man." That's on my ipod's writing mix that I use when writing my fic, and I think it's a perfect PB&J song. Good choices, and I'm enjoying your story! -CH
Author's Response: Do you have the CD I'm your fan? It's a tribute disk that has a great version of that song Glad you like the story so far - Thanks for reviewing!
Date: November 12, 2007 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 3
I really loved Jim's 'Pam' playlist - I'm going to have to throw those songs together and listen to it myself ;)
Great sales call with Dwight and Jim! I always love when they work together.
Author's Response: I like writing Dwight. I just think of a paranoid vulcan and it seems to come out sounding like him :-D Thanks for reviewing!
9 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2007 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 3
Love the mix of old and new song titles. Got misty and angsty just reading them. Like the callback to Travelling Salesmen. You wrote Dwight and Jim perfectly.
Author's Response:
It was really fun to come up with the list. They were all songs I had on my iTunes, which probably means I'm kind of a sap. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: November 12, 2007 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait until the ending
This should be a real episode
minus the whole "camera crew not following Pam" part. :D
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I know losing the camera crew was a break in continuity, but I didn't think Pam would show them the play list even if they were there. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: November 11, 2007 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
Super excited to see what's on Jim's "Pam" playlist, especially whether it's current or previous ;)
Author's Response: Okay, no pressure here. Thanks for reviewing. I think the playlist will reflect how the relationship has played out over time. Hope you like the picks - ml
8 [Report This]Date: November 11, 2007 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
Great job with the convo between Jim and Dwight. I liked that Jim was being honest in his feelings but also adding disclaimers so Dwight wouldn't think he and Pam were having problems.
Author's Response: Writing Jim's side of the conversation was hard. I couldn't mention Angela, since Dwight is certain that Jim is clueless about their past relationship. I'm really glad that you liked how it turned out. Thanks for reviewing!
8 [Report This]Date: November 11, 2007 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
“She made me…wxmychst,” Michael said, mumbling the last part of the sentence. This was so perfectly Michael!
Author's Response: Thanks for mentioning that bit. It made me laugh when I wrote it. It's the small, throw-away bits of the office that make it such fun to watch over and over again. Thanks for the review - ml
Date: November 11, 2007 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love your song choices! But, a long time ago I remember one of the Beach Boys saying in an interview that "In my room" was actually about ...ummm...you know... self-gratification. :)
Author's Response: Oh...Really? Hmmm. Well then, pretty glad Pam didn't know that. 'Cause that would have been...awkward. See, that's why I like writing for you guys, I learns stuff. Should I put the DeVinyls on Jim's Pam list? Thanks for reviewing.
Date: November 11, 2007 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
really cute. I'm enjoying it. I'm curious about the pam soundtrack
Author's Response: Moment of panic here... Only thought about putting in one of two songs, but from the reviews, it looks like i should include a number of tunes. Still, listening to music at work today and thinking of songs, not the worst idea. Thanks so much for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: November 07, 2007 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good stuff, I'm invested in this. Although IMO Roy would not have suffieciently good musical taste to appreciate "Thunder Road." More of a Motely Crue fan, I bet. Your take on Pam's reaction is interesting...I guess I would find it suprising that it would hit her so hard to provoke that sort of reaction, but maybe. I know if I were Jim I would NOT be pleased.
Author's Response: Hmmm. Maybe Roy's dad liked the song and Roy grew up hearing it. I could see Roy liking the Crue more than the Cure, but he has pretty good taste in some area. After all, he chose Pam in high school. I know I'm walking a bit of a line with Pam's reaction to seeing Roy, and I thank you for the encouragement and the review!
Date: November 07, 2007 07:40 am Title: Chapter 1
This is actually very good, and cute. I really enjoyed reading it and to be honest i had a few hand over mouth moments when reading.
Can't wait for chapter 2.
Author's Response: I'm kinda hoping that your hand was over your mouth to stop you from giggling, not because my writing made you ill. Will put up ch 2 as soon as I can. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: November 07, 2007 06:53 am Title: Chapter 1
This is a promising start- I LOVE Pam's conflicting feelings about Roy. She was with him for so long that they must have been happy, and I can really see how she might have a hard time watching him move on as she's moving on. I really liked that you included that feeling.
Also, Michael toting around a big old boombox with his iPod attached ia a great, silly image!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I'm hoping to explore Pam's feelings a bit more in the next installment. Thanks for reviewing