Date: April 10, 2008 09:15 pm Title: Casino Night
This is really nice. Your ideas about what happened off camera seem very realistic. Good job!
10 [Report This]Date: January 07, 2008 04:53 pm Title: Casino Night
I can't even tell you how perfect that was. I've been following this story since the beginning, and really looking forward to this chapter since you started it. Jim's thoughts about Pam, his future, and everything she meant to him was flawless. It brought me right back to last May, and how I just felt exactly like Pam in this chapter - she tells him everything, her great moment of truth, and basically nothing is made of it for an entire week? I mean, come on! This last chapter really just brought me back to that time, and how it ended and there was this huge sigh of relief and happiness, and how the future was just wide open. I loved The Job, and I love this story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. I'm glad you've followed this story from the beginning and stuck with it to the end. I had a bit of trouble getting Pam's thoughts down for 'The Job' so I'm glad you felt it expressed them well. Thanks so much :)
Date: January 07, 2008 01:11 pm Title: Casino Night
Wow. Just....wow. I am so sad to see this story go, but I can honestly say it was one of the most beautifully written, moving, and inspiring stories I have ever read here. Thank you so much for you dedication to keeping in style with the characters and continuity in terms of their actions. It honestly felt like I was watching the episode myself, except with a microscope that could see into their thoughts and hopes and dreams.
I also loved how you continued with your hello, goodbye theme throughout the story, and then finally in the end they were just...ONE. Beautiful!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and commenting throughout. I really can't believe how nice people have been, this is only my first fic here. Thanks again :)
8 [Report This]Date: November 18, 2007 07:09 pm Title: Casino Night
Where have I been that I haven't seen this before? This was an awesome first chapter in your first Office fic! I didn't see anything quirky about your style at all - it was one of the many things I enjoyed. And the last two lines were beautifuly heartbreaking.
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm glad you liked the style since I've gotten quite fond of it now. Originally I had so many ideas for this fandom but I couldn't seem to start anything. When I did this came out and I'm so glad people have enjoyed it.
Date: November 13, 2007 06:53 am Title: Casino Night
Great chapter. Even though it made me sad, I still enjoyed reading it. Knowing how they end up certainly makes it easier : )
10 [Report This]Date: November 09, 2007 10:24 pm Title: Casino Night
I love this! I love this! I LOVE THIS! Please update soon! PLEASE. I love angsty Jim. :D You write very fluidly, very vividly.
Author's Response: WOW, thanks so much for your lovely comments. I have the next chapter done, I just need to edit and fix a few parts. Should be up tomorrow or Monday. Thanks for reading :)
Date: November 09, 2007 09:34 pm Title: Casino Night
Wow I REALLY liked this story. I think the style, actually, is what made it so good for me. You've really captured what I think Jim was feeling that night. This story really stands out from other Casino Night fics, and that's hard to do. Great job!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you for your comments. I was a little cautious of doing a Casino Night fic but this idea wouldn't get out of my head. Glad you enjoyed it.
10 [Report This]Date: November 09, 2007 09:12 pm Title: Casino Night
Beautifully written, poignant. I have tears in my eyes. Thank you for this.
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read and comment :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 09, 2007 08:54 pm Title: Casino Night
Aaaah it hurts. Just like the episode did. This really feels true to character. My favorite parts:
She tries to say something nice about being friends and he has to beg her to stop. It's ironic really because he knows it would have been the highlight of his day if she'd only said it yesterday.
So true, and yet something I hadn't thought of before. And:
Suddenly he's trembling and alone, crying silently because that life, that life with her, is all he's ever wanted.
He doesn't know who to be without her.
Ouch, poor Jim.
Such a good job. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for your lovely comments. That part of the scene where she tells him how much their friendship means always gets to me because you just know it would have been this huge pivotal thing for him in any earlier ep but when she says it it's not enough anymore. rnGlad it feels true to character as well, considering this is one of my earliest attempts at Jim/Pam.rnThanks for your comment, I'm a huge fan of your stuff so this really made my day.
7 [Report This]Date: November 09, 2007 06:20 pm Title: Casino Night
I like that you've presented the events of Casino Night in a new and interesting way. Good song choice for this scene.
9 [Report This]Date: November 09, 2007 05:48 pm Title: Casino Night
Melancholy and so, so good. Great job.
10 [Report This]Date: November 09, 2007 05:44 pm Title: Casino Night
This? Is beautiful. Welcome to the fandom! I can't wait to read more of your stuff. I tried to pick out a favorite line, but there are too many. Just lovely. I need to go read it again.
Author's Response: Thank you so much :) It made my night to see such a nice comment from a writer I admire so much. And thanks for the welcome, I think I'm going to like it around here :)