10 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2008 11:30 pm Title: The Negotiation
This is your best one! I think you are spot-on with Jim. Loved it.
10 [Report This]Date: December 16, 2007 10:16 am Title: The Negotiation
"Suddenly he's trembling and alone, crying silently because that life, that life with her, is all he's ever wanted."
Hands down the most beautiful line I've ever read in a fanfic. This story is amazing.
8 [Report This]Date: December 14, 2007 08:10 pm Title: The Negotiation
"He ignores the knowledge that any moment with Pam, even the bad ones, feels more real than a thousand moments with Karen." Beautiful line. I just love the way you're writing both Jim and Pam's POV of the same scenario. And the angst is so much easier to read knowing there's a happy ending to S3.
10 [Report This]Date: December 14, 2007 06:57 am Title: The Negotiation
Wow! Powerful stuff. You really did a great job illustrating what Jim and Pam were thinking and feeling during that break room scene. (I still have a hard time watching it..too painful.) Even though it was depressing, it was real and beautifully written. Can't wait for more!
Date: December 14, 2007 05:45 am Title: The Negotiation
Wow. And Ow. These two lines just leveled me:
He wishes all those things weren’t so inexorably tied up with loving her so he could have held onto them.
Sometimes he wishes losing her hadn’t meant losing himself along the way.
Gah! That is the sad story of S3 Jim in a nutshell. Nicely done.