9 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2006 09:28 pm Title: When She Knows
Not clunky at all. Beautifully written.
Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate that.
9 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2006 08:49 pm Title: When She Knows
Well, it totally works for me. :) I could imagine Pam finally deciding to act, and not stopping until it is all over. Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks. I imagine her being panic-stricken once she gets it all worked out.
10 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2006 08:46 pm Title: When She Knows
No, no, this doesn't feel clunky at all - it's wonderfully passionate.
Author's Response: Thank you. Isn't it interesting that such a down-to-earth relationship can inspire huge passion in so many people?
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 09:46 pm Title: Dragonfly
So, so good! Fantastically economical use of language!
LOVE IT.
And love Jim, but that's another matter ;)
Author's Response: Thank you. My goal was to express exactly what I wanted to as concisely as possible. I'm so pleased that you saw that.
9 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 09:39 pm Title: Her Apartment
Wonderful. Drabble away...
10 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2006 08:33 am Title: Dragonfly
You have a gift with words. The whole paragraph about Roy was beautifully written.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really appreciate the review and the compliment.
10 [Report This]Date: September 02, 2006 11:52 pm Title: Dragonfly
For drabble, this is pretty damn poetic.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review and the compliment.
Date: September 02, 2006 12:01 pm Title: Dragonfly
I loved this piece. So simple, but very evocative.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I appreciate that.
10 [Report This]Date: September 02, 2006 09:52 am Title: Dragonfly
This was so lovely & so sad. It was such a well told short story--packs a lot of emotional punch in so few words.
Author's Response: Thank you. I wasn't sure how well the theme would be received.
10 [Report This]Date: September 02, 2006 07:48 am Title: Dragonfly
Oh, that's amazing. *loves Jim*
Author's Response: Thank you, and yes, Jim is the perfect man. ;) I so <3 him.
Date: September 02, 2006 06:53 am Title: Dragonfly
How horribly sad. Beautifully crafted.
Author's Response: Thank you very much.
Date: September 01, 2006 06:23 am Title: Her Apartment
Continue please! And "he loves that she is his home" sums it all up beautifully.
Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate the review.
Date: August 31, 2006 05:44 am Title: Her Apartment
Ah, the potential that is Pam. You capture her, and the way he would see her, beautifully.
Author's Response: Thank you, that means a lot me.
Date: August 30, 2006 07:55 pm Title: Her Apartment
That was such a lovely description of Pam's apartment. So much for Jim to love. :)
Author's Response: Thank you
8 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2006 06:35 pm Title: Her Apartment
This was beautiful. I loved your repeating "He loves" and my favorite was "He loves that she is his home".
Author's Response: Thank you
Date: August 30, 2006 06:11 pm Title: Her Apartment
That's an amazing little snapshot.
Also, I'm jealous and want Pam to help me decorate my place.
Author's Response: Thank you. Pam's apt is an idealized version of my place, you know, without the pile of laundry in the corner, the stacks of dirty dishes in the sink, and the layer of dust and cat air that covers everything. : )