Date: September 27, 2017 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sweetly, achingly, perfectly beautiful. Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: November 25, 2007 07:40 am Title: Chapter 1
don't worry about "revisiting" a story that's been done before. When it's revisited well, it's better than second drink! I really enjoyed this!! Keep writing. :)
Author's Response: WOW, time4moxie....thank you so much for an encouraging review. I have no idea if I have even one more story in me, but I really appreciate the encouragement nonetheless. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you again!
8 [Report This]Date: November 25, 2007 07:13 am Title: Chapter 1
Awesome. Just perfect. Fluffy angst/angsty fluff is the best!
I don't think I could ever get enough of the alternate possibilities for the Back from Vacation storyline.
Really, great job on this.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm so glad to know that there are others like myself who almost always want Jim to walk through those doors. *sigh* I appreciate your kind words!
Date: November 25, 2007 05:57 am Title: Chapter 1
I so wanted Jim to be the one who found Pam crying, instead of Dwight. I really liked this, Ra!! The ending made me tear up...the whole handkerchief scenario was awesome. Thanks for the read! Now can you work your magic with Casino Night?
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. Wow, Casino Night, the granddaddy of all endings....not sure I have any magic there. ;) Thanks for the review!
8 [Report This]Date: November 24, 2007 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very cute story! I wasn't expecting it to switch to first person, and I thought it was pretty neat that you did that. Especially after Jim called Pam out on talking to him in the third person.
And I officially think I'm an idiot, but I was a little confused on the ending until I came here and read EH's review. For some reason, I thought you had written Pam as the bride, so I was a tad lost for a second. But now I get it, and I like it very much.
Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out, you're not an idiot! I wondered about that too...and have cleared up the wording a little bit.rnrnThanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: November 24, 2007 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, RA, what a nice take on the BfV storyline. Of course it wouldn't happen because the season had to last until May, but I'm sure we all did wish at the time that Jim had found her crying instead of Dwight. But now Pam and Dwight have an "understanding" of sorts too, that continues to this day.
And I got teary-eyed at the end when I realized it was their daughter's wedding...awww. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the kind words. Yes, the good thing about the way BFV actually ended was Dwight being so protective...in his Dwight way. It was fun, though, to explore another option. Thanks for the review!
8 [Report This]Date: November 24, 2007 11:32 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this, please continue it soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! It's my first fic, maybe my last...I'm nervous. Gah! But it was fun. :)