10 [Report This]Date: December 26, 2009 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow, that was beautiful! I love the little elements, how Jim makes Pam repeat herself 'not in third person' - I loved that. The handkerchief at the wedding was lovely, too. Beautifully done!
Date: November 28, 2007 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh I LOVE that you revisited this moment! I always thought about how cool it would have been for Jim to have seen THAT moment and what might've happened. This was great.
Author's Response: Thanks LoveFool, I really appreciate the review and that you enjoyed me revisiting a moment from season three. Thanks for your encouraging words!
Date: November 25, 2007 11:40 am Title: Chapter 2
Very nice. I agree that there were many moments in Season 3 which could have (and should have) gone a different way. I love what you have happen with the handkerchief. Sweet.
Author's Response: My grandma actually carried them in her waistband and my dad still carries them. ;) So, it was a heartfelt connection for me...I'm glad that it seemed to translate to this story. Thanks so much for the review!
Date: November 25, 2007 06:29 am Title: Chapter 2
This was incredible! It was fluffy and angsty and perfect. If only those two would have gotten it together sooner we might have ended our last ep with a wedding.
This was my favourite part:
He was staring straight at her. His eyes....she thought that she had seen just about every look of his expressive face, every nuance and shading that always gave away exactly what he was thinking. But this, she had never seen. Not even when he was standing in a dark parking lot in an even darker sweater, not after he had kissed her beside his desk, not even as he let go of her hands and walked away.
I really hope that you write more fanfics. You have a great writing style. You could do a series of "near misses" alternate universes. I would read every single one!
Author's Response: Beeswax, thank you so much! I have no idea if I have even one more story in me, to be honest! But I SO appreciate that you would read if I do. Thanks again for your supportive words.
7 [Report This]Date: November 24, 2007 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
LOVE IT.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you did! It was fun to write, for sure. Thanks for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: November 24, 2007 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awww....how adorable! Loved every minute of it!
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review, and for reading!
7 [Report This]Date: November 24, 2007 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
great job, I loved this! and I still hate that Jim didn't get to see her cry that day. Bo'well!
Author's Response: Yes, the brilliant Office writers had a plan for season three, which awesome. :) Still, it's fun to try out some different scenarios.rnThanks for reading and reviewing!