Date: December 16, 2007 05:39 pm Title: Hidden Meaning
You already know what I think about this story. It's just fantastic!
I'm sitting here with a hot chocolate enjoying every word all over again. What a fabulous way to pass the time during our Christmasless Office time. Great work, Ra!
10 [Report This]Date: December 13, 2007 06:39 am Title: Hidden Meaning
This was so good. When Jim told Pam she makes him a better man...I got all moist-eyed. Excellent job!
Author's Response: Wow, I'm so glad you thought so, GodInThisChilis. I can't tell you how much I appreciate your review and that you stayed with my little story. Thanks so much!
10 [Report This]Date: December 12, 2007 08:42 am Title: Hidden Meaning
Gah! Want. More.
Great job so far.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, Andys_Gal! I thought I would post a chapter a day...yeah, right. I had to just get this out...so it was like, what...three days? Well, it was all done from the start, so it was just a matter of refining and posting. Anyway, I hope you stayed with this story and thanks again!
10 [Report This]Date: December 11, 2007 06:53 pm Title: Hidden Meaning
Wow, just wow . Phylis' wedding just broke my heart, and this is like a delicious do-over! Love where you're taking the story, loved the emails and Jim's reticence with Pam's mom on the phone. Thanks for all the updates, I check back several times a day just for this story!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks Annika. As you probably know, it's all complete now. I really hope the ending did not disappoint! Thanks for reading and for reviewing; I really appreciate it!
Date: December 11, 2007 02:30 pm Title: Hidden Meaning
So many updates ! I just love that Jim called Pam's mom. And then proceeded to tell her everything via email and not on the phone. Lovely. Please please more.
Author's Response: Thanks, amalia! I'm glad that you liked the phone conversation...well, what little of it there was. Yeah, he had to spill it all on email, too intimidated to talk to her, I think. Thanks for reading, and I hope you will continue to do so. There's only a bit left.... ;)
Date: December 09, 2007 09:13 pm Title: Hidden Meaning
Seriously you have all mothers down perfect here. I know it is so sad to read Pam's thoughts, but the humor in between made me laugh out loud. Terrific! I also squeed with I realized there was a chap 2 already up!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, uncgirl. I'm glad there was some levity too. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: December 09, 2007 09:05 pm Title: Hidden Meaning
Aw, Pam, my heart is breaking at her subtext. Ow.
P.S. A chapter a day? YES!!!
Author's Response: Yes, the story it pretty much done, just refining as I go. Thank so much for reading and reviewing, lisahoo!
Date: December 09, 2007 08:17 pm Title: Hidden Meaning
What a great beginning. This reminded me so much of similar conversations and silent thoughts I've had with my daughter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, kaystar. I'm glad it seemed realistic...I have a daughter who's too young for ** yet...but I know it's coming. ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
9 [Report This]Date: December 09, 2007 01:15 pm Title: Hidden Meaning
This is an exciting and intriguing style - I'm looking forward to the next chapters! Great work!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm so glad that you want to keep reading. :)
Date: December 09, 2007 01:04 pm Title: Hidden Meaning
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, skeber. Maybe tonight, but definitely tomorrow. Thanks for reading and reviewing!