Date: December 09, 2007 09:15 pm Title: Watching, Feeling, Knowing, Ignoring
Still going strong here and it's wonderful. I can't wait for more. I loved your description of Jim's emotions, it was really moving and you also handing the five way conversation so well. Love Pam's mom!!!
Author's Response: uncgirl, your review is SO encouraging--thank you. I really hope you enjoy the rest as well. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: December 09, 2007 08:32 pm Title: Watching, Feeling, Knowing, Ignoring
"Hey, Michael, can I talk to you about something?"
I totally flashed to CN Jim as I read that line.
I just loved Pam's mom meeting Karen, especially her acting as though she didn't know who she was at first.
Date: December 09, 2007 04:39 pm Title: Watching, Feeling, Knowing, Ignoring
I really like this and it seems totally like Pam to not tell her mom everything and for them to talk in subtext. And that was spot-on Michael. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, JamLover! I am really glad to hear that you thought Michael was spot-on...he was not easy for me to write. Thanks for the review, and for reading...I really appreciate it!
10 [Report This]Date: December 09, 2007 03:00 pm Title: Watching, Feeling, Knowing, Ignoring
ooooo! and to quote michael "awk-waaard". this story is great so far!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I hope my later chapters will be OK too...it gets a little heavier. But hopefully in a good way....thanks for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate it!
Date: December 09, 2007 02:57 pm Title: Watching, Feeling, Knowing, Ignoring
I'm liking this a lot; your italicized subnotes are perfect for building tension, and I can't wait to see where this goes! -CH
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Becky! I hope you will enjoy the rest as well. *nervous* ;) Thank you for reading and reviewing!
8 [Report This]Date: December 09, 2007 02:26 pm Title: Watching, Feeling, Knowing, Ignoring
HA! Yes! Go Pam's Mom! I really like the way this written, with a kind of "banter" between what everyone says outloud then *what they are thinking*
Author's Response: Yah, momma bear comes out there a little at the end of chapter two. ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: December 09, 2007 02:20 pm Title: Watching, Feeling, Knowing, Ignoring
This is so good! Just read the first two chapters and am looking forward to the rest. I have a softspot for stories that include Pam's mom, and you really portrayed her well.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, NanReg. Pam's mom got something like two minutes of airtime on the show, yet I really like her too (obviously). She's got to be at least some of the reason Pam's so great, right? ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it!
Date: December 09, 2007 01:52 pm Title: Watching, Feeling, Knowing, Ignoring
I really really like this. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks, I hope you enjoy the rest as well. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!