8 [Report This]Date: December 11, 2007 07:45 pm Title: Maybe it's always been about me......
Really enjoye this chapter. It was easy to feel Pam's pain in the first section and Jim's sense of hope in the second. And in between was poor Karen, clueless while her boyfriend was planning how to break up with her.
And I like the way Jim's thoughts were escalating in this paragraph:
"He was already walking toward her, already seeing stars behind his eyes, already feeling his heart pound through his suit jacket, his stomach pooling into a puddle at his feet. It was too loud- there were too many people- Kevin was beating his drums and Jim had a visceral need to take those drumsticks and shove them down his throat."
Author's Response: Thank you so much, kaystar! I hoped to convey how desperate Jim felt to just stop her. It's not like him to have such a reaction to a pair of drumsticks! So I'm glad that seemed to come across. Thanks for the review; I appreciate it so much!
Date: December 11, 2007 10:15 am Title: Maybe it's always been about me......
OMG OMG OMG! If only PW happened this way! Cannot wait for the next chapter. I know that is a lame comment, but I'm a little distracted right now. (Aiee!!!!)
Author's Response: Thanks lisahoo! I posted several at once this afternoon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: December 11, 2007 08:58 am Title: Maybe it's always been about me......
nooooooooooooooooooooooooo dont stop there moreeeeeeeeeeeee!
Date: December 11, 2007 08:36 am Title: Maybe it's always been about me......
Ooooo it's getting juicy! I like where you are taking this. I have the feeling you are going to make a lot of frustrated Phyllis's Wedding viewers happy! How cathartic!
Author's Response: Thanks, Abigail! I hope you're right...that my story will make people happy. ;) It sure was fun to write. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: December 11, 2007 08:18 am Title: Maybe it's always been about me......
it's killin me up here on this cliff! haha. another great chapter! i think this is what everyone watching that ep hoped he would do! alas.... lol. cant wait to see what happens next!!
Author's Response: I hope you will hang on....I'm thinking I might try to post three chapters this afternoon. Unexpected time off...hmmmm..... Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: December 11, 2007 07:30 am Title: Maybe it's always been about me......
Oh good!! He's actually doing something about it this time!!!! Yay Jim!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! Yes, I wish he had called out after her at PW (obviously!) ;) I hope you will keep reading!
9 [Report This]Date: December 11, 2007 07:15 am Title: Maybe it's always been about me......
Ohhh---Now that is an ending to give me chills!!! More, more, more! -CH
Author's Response: It's coming...and I hope it doesn't disappoint! Thanks so much for reviewing and reading, Becky215!
9 [Report This]Date: December 11, 2007 05:31 am Title: Maybe it's always been about me......
Oh! If only! For some reason, I really like the title of this chapter, and the chapter itself didn't disappoint. Now I'm on the edge of my seat!
Author's Response: Thanks, NanReg! I really had fun coming up with the chapter titles. I'll be updating soon...thank you so much for reviewing, I really appreciate it!
Date: December 11, 2007 05:14 am Title: Maybe it's always been about me......
"PAM!" She stopped. And she turned to look at him
Dude! You can't stop here!! Ir eally hope you continue, because I'll not be a happy reader if you do! :) Lovely job so far! I love the thoughts and the inner meanings before their words b/c we all know how much Jim/Pam don't say but their meaning comes through oh so well in their actions/faces. Lovely job! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: WildBerryJam, I hope you will keep reading! I'm home unexpectedly and will update. I hope it doesn't disappoint...**nervous**...thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: December 11, 2007 04:45 am Title: Maybe it's always been about me......
Yesssssssss
Author's Response: I hope you will keep reading, nbyevu. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: December 11, 2007 03:14 am Title: Maybe it's always been about me......
Oh no! You can't end it there! I need to know what happens! Pleeeeeease update soon!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it. I will update soon. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!