Reviews For Between and Underneath the Words
Reviewer: kaystar Signed 
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Date: December 11, 2007 08:06 pm Title: A man grown
Author's Response: Again, thanks kaystar. I have to admit (Is that braggy? I don't mean to be braggy. /Pam) that I am fond of the phone call between Diane and Jim...how she's trying not to let on that she's overjoyed he's calling, and that she knows exactly why. It tickles me that she makes herself wait as well. Thanks so much for the review and for pulling out parts of my little story to comment on. It really has been a huge encouragement for a not-very-confident writer...thank you!
8 [Report This]Date: December 11, 2007 08:06 pm Title: A man grown
"Pam, for whom asking him out to coffee was her equivalent to him saying "I'm in love with you." He remembered her awkward flirting in the break room: "REM cycle". She was insecure and vulnerable, at best; why had he not considered that when she took even the smallest of steps toward him?"
Nice job with Jim's thoughts - and the break-up with Karen. And I totally admired Diane's restraint in waiting 2 hours to check the computer! I'd be sitting there hitting refresh every 30 seconds!
Author's Response: Again, thanks kaystar. I have to admit (Is that braggy? I don't mean to be braggy. /Pam) that I am fond of the phone call between Diane and Jim...how she's trying not to let on that she's overjoyed he's calling, and that she knows exactly why. It tickles me that she makes herself wait as well. Thanks so much for the review and for pulling out parts of my little story to comment on. It really has been a huge encouragement for a not-very-confident writer...thank you!
Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11, 2007 11:57 am Title: A man grown
Date: December 11, 2007 11:57 am Title: A man grown
Wow. 3 chapters. You're awesome. I'm looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks. I hope you will continue hanging on through this story! I have a little more time...we'll see how much more I can get posted. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!