1 [Report This]Date: December 14, 2020 12:59 am Title: Epilogue- Love
These two definitely needed some guidance like this in S3 - and the underlying dialogue between Pam and her mom is really well conceived.
1 [Report This]Date: March 29, 2019 08:48 pm Title: Epilogue- Love
This is a great story--a nice mix of style (epistolary and not) and a great point to go AU, with a good followup to the split. Thanks for writing and sharing it!
1 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2018 03:37 pm Title: Epilogue- Love
This is absolutely gorgeous. Sweet,with just the right amount of angst and tension. Thank you
10 [Report This]Date: November 01, 2009 07:41 pm Title: Epilogue- Love
What a wonderfully crafted story. Honestly your use of the subtext in all their words was fantastic, intense and engaging. I loved Pam's mother, I found her thoughts extremely well executed, her feelings wonderfully maternal.
Just brilliant writing, I enjoyed this immensely.
Date: December 13, 2007 08:20 pm Title: Epilogue- Love
Wow, RA!! Amazing story....just great! Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent with us. I loved it. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for you kind words, Stitious! I sure enjoyed writing it, and I'm just so grateful that it seems some readers enjoyed it as well. Thanks for staying with my little story and for the review!
9 [Report This]Date: December 12, 2007 10:45 pm Title: Epilogue- Love
This was the perfect statement from Jim:
I believe she is inspired to begin painting from her heart. And from mine.
Just what Mrs. Beesly would want to know, without going into too much detail too soon.
I simply enjoyed the heck out of this story. Well done!
Author's Response: I thought that was very Jim-like too, invis. ;) As you said, gave the information Mrs. Beesly (and the readers) would want to know without giving away too much. And it was succinct, which men so often are. ;) rnrnWow, your kind and encouraging words have truly meant so much to me through this process. Thank you so very much.
Date: December 12, 2007 09:26 pm Title: Epilogue- Love
You have very imaginative concepts for stories. They always flow logically. But I feel like they are little like you have described Pam's pictures in this story. This was good, much better than a lot I have read, but it could be great. I think you have it in you.
Author's Response: Wow, that is a review for sure, and I really, REALLY appreciate it. I wonder what you mean by Pam's pictures?? I have to admit that I find some starkness in my writing. Sometimes I think that's OK--I sometimes don't care for stories that have paragraphs and paragraphs of descriptors, when a few words will do--but sometimes I do think I could flesh things out. I'm not sure if that's what you meant, but either way, I am intrigued and would love to hear more from you if you are inclined to contact me. And, I should add, that I don't even know enough about writing to know if I have described mine correctly. Yikes! I'm a little (OK, more than a little) intimidated because I know there are 'real' writers on this forum who are reading my work. It's so exhilirating to write though that I just can't help myself. ;) Anyway, thank you again, really, for an honest review and for reading my stories. I appreciate that you thought my work was good and could be great. Thanks again!
9 [Report This]Date: December 12, 2007 07:38 pm Title: Epilogue- Love
Great job! Congrats on a wonderful story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Crystalized! I really enjoyed writing it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
7 [Report This]Date: December 12, 2007 06:50 pm Title: Epilogue- Love
Awww, RA ... I am sad to see your story end, truly. It was sweet and poignant and very fitting. That time in the show was so sad, and you brought life to it without being cheesy. Bravo.
Author's Response: Oh, BBG, I am so glad you liked it! I'm kinda sad it's over too, it was so much fun to write and post. But, **sigh** the holidays approach and you know, real life gets in the way of writing fanfic (!) ;) I'm so pleased that you thought my story brought life to the show in a sweet and not cheesy way. Avoid the cheese at all costs! ;) Thanks again for a really great review and for your encouragement.
10 [Report This]Date: December 12, 2007 05:00 pm Title: Epilogue- Love
I loved every word of this and I'm so sad it's over. I'm glad (I think?) Jim & Pam got it on in the end, but it was very vague and ambiguous. It all felt very PB&J to me. Thanks so much for writing this. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much Sharipep. Yup, Jim was ambling around in his apartment with Pam still in his bed, so....yeah. ;) (I actually wondered if Jim would feel funny emailing Pam's mom while Pam was piled up in his bed....but notice that he doesn't mention that. heehee.) It was Pam's turn to really do the declaring this time...and she can be pretty evasive, so it wasn't like an I LOVE YOU. I hope it still came across though. Thank you so much for being a faithful reader and reviewer!
Date: December 12, 2007 04:31 pm Title: Epilogue- Love
I just loved this fic. It really captured the essence and uncertainty that's always surrounded the relationship of Jim and Pam. I truly heard their voices in your writing.
And I'm so glad you had Jim attend Pam's art show in your story. (I still haven't forgiven him for not going in the real canon episode)
Keep writing and I'll be sure to keep reading!
M
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Mirielle. I am so glad you heard their voices, wow, that is a great compliment! I really appreciate you reading and especially reviewing. Thanks again!
10 [Report This]Date: December 12, 2007 03:50 pm Title: Epilogue- Love
Perfect. Simply perfect.
Author's Response: Wow, NanReg. You've been a faithful reviewer and I'm so glad and grateful that you liked the ending. Thank you, thank you...thank you!