Reviewer: Early Worm Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15, 2008 02:05 pm Title: All the night's magic seems to whisper and hush

I would never throw garbage at you!
Shame on those who do or would! :P
I would wait for you to finish, even if it takes you years! :P
I am a slow writer too. :D
Really great story and in the words of Pam "Awesome"!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15, 2008 12:03 pm Title: All the night's magic seems to whisper and hush

Hey, me again.

I just noticed the Moondance ref...forget The Kinks and black Labs, now I'm certain you've infiltrated my head. That's long been one of my internal soundtracks when I write certain J/P scenes. Dang. (Do you know his song Natalia?Totes in my head the entire time I was writing my recent fic, One down...) Just thought I'd give a cyber high-five over the power of old Van ;-)

Author's Response:

Well, maybe brain infiltration is *my* secret power.  Sadly, this power is actually less awesome than it appears, as it seems to be relegated strictly to Office-related material.  Oh well.

And yeah, isn't Moondance amaaaazing? (/Kelly) Apparently the power of old Van is far-reaching, since I believe Sweetpea also said Moondance was one of *her* favorites when I floated it as a chapter theme song.  I too do the internal Jim/Pam soundtrack while writing (well, and not-so-internal, since in my infinite coolness I often put a song on repeat while writing).  I've gone through a few, but I really seem to be stuck on Landslide by Fleetwood Mac for the fragile romantic scenes, and 6 Underground by the Sneaker Pimps if seduction is on the agenda.  The chapter titles for Shift generally come from whatever song I've been listening to obsessively during that chapter -- though I try to make them actually relevant as well... with varying degrees of success. ;)

Hm, I must read this "One Down" you speak of...

Reviewer: maryuc Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 15, 2008 11:25 am Title: All the night's magic seems to whisper and hush

wow - i just found your story and raed the whole thing - it's fantastic!!! i love the detail that you write - its not boring, just paints a great picture in the mind.  i cant wait to read more ... also - i love how even though they are like "together" now they still are a little shy around eachother - very good reading!!! update soon!!!

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15, 2008 08:31 am Title: I won't rest while you break my will

I'm really enjoying your story, and now you've thrown quite a new glitch in with Roy. I can't wait to see what happens next.

(love Moondance, too, though I prefer the Grady Tate version)

Please keep writing.

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15, 2008 08:03 am Title: All the night's magic seems to whisper and hush

Yes! Since it was apparently partly my pestering superpowers (there's Super Girl, Wonder Woman and now, Nudnick Girl ;-) that got you going again, I must admit - it was worth the wait - and it's a rare WIP I'd say that about.

The wake-up scene is so warm and intimate and natural -  just the right tone after your last scorching chapter. I especially loved Jim realizing how long Pam has reciprocated his feelings via her remembering small things he's told her, maybe years before - so affirming. (But are you trying to kill me with your choice of details? Jim is so right about Ray Davies and I have black labs - kryptonite, I tell you.) Also really liked Jim's awkward uncertainty about how to 'be' - what he can expect once they returned to Scranton - that whole scene is just spot on. And so very sweet. Now I want them to go upstairs and smooch, and here comes freaking Roy?!?! Dang, sister...way to introduce a little tension. I'm riveted and waiting.

 

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 15, 2008 07:22 am Title: All the night's magic seems to whisper and hush

Lovely to have you back, thirtypercent!  I re-read the last chapter just to get back on track, and it reminded me that I must have read that chapter dozens of time before your "hiatus."  Loved this update and I hope you can add to it soon--especially with that ending!  I suspect I'm going to be reading this from the very beginning at some point today : )

Reviewer: callisto Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 09, 2008 04:43 pm Title: Spinning on that dizzy edge, I kissed her face and kissed her head

This is one of those scenes that just leaves you speechless. Take all the time you need between updates if this is the payoff! I'm sorry I didn't review this story earlier, because it's just so heartfelt and real. Excellent stuff! :D

Reviewer: jbklover Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2008 12:17 pm Title: I won't rest while you break my will

Ok =, how did I miss this one. I am extremely happy about seeing it commented on the boards today, so thanks for that. Anyhow, love it so far. Very visual and intriguing. Love the way you space it as well. Easy to read, and of course, the subject makes you want more. I love that it's just his fantasy in the shower, but it makes even more exciting hoping that you will make become reality. On to the next chapter.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2008 07:37 am Title: Spinning on that dizzy edge, I kissed her face and kissed her head

Just revisited this favorite, for old time's sake.  I hope you're able to continue some time really soon : ) 

Reviewer: Sweetpea Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21, 2008 03:50 am Title: Spinning on that dizzy edge, I kissed her face and kissed her head

Yes, it certainly was a big one and I'm so glad to see it posted.  It was so great to see Pam being free with her feelings and Jim being rewarded (ahem) for his patience.  But what happens when they go back home?  I can hardly wait to find out! :-*

Reviewer: Sharipep Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 20, 2008 05:51 am Title: Spinning on that dizzy edge, I kissed her face and kissed her head

i love this story soooo much and a chapter like this is exactly why. i love how well you portray Jim and Pam's connection to one another. And the sex - hotttttt. Take all the time b/t updates that you need, its always worth it to me! :)

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19, 2008 08:50 pm Title: Spinning on that dizzy edge, I kissed her face and kissed her head

I'll say it was a big one! wow!....There was something so interesting about this chapter. You managed to have the tension mount in this way that started off really sweet and ended up very, very HOT. Nice work.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 19, 2008 06:15 pm Title: Spinning on that dizzy edge, I kissed her face and kissed her head

Thirty, I've loved this story from the start, and this was such an amazing chapter--so worth the wait.  It was hot and romantic and awkward : ) Loved it.