Date: August 08, 2008 08:56 am Title: July
Wow. I'm a bit stunned by those pictures to remember what I was going to write about the actual chapter!
Something along the lines of believable fight and nice to see Jim's dad presented in less than favorable light than the usual fic cliches and I can remember driving home in those conditions and...*shudder* Seriously. Scarred for life after seeing that statue!
Date: August 01, 2008 07:53 pm Title: July
Oh yeah, Pam definitley chose a creepy place to stop. It seems like the kind of place The Addams would like to go ;) I love how deeply you let Jim delve in his letter this month. The fact that he could write about it so candidly to her shows how comfortable he is in the state of their relationship. And who doesn't love that. Thanks for sharing.
Date: July 30, 2008 10:46 pm Title: July
I am so glad to see you back writing. This story...in general...anything! This story is great!
Date: July 30, 2008 09:54 pm Title: July
Really interesting layers you've done here. I kinda like that maybe Jim's dad's kinda a jerk and not everyone is all happy, smiley in both families.
Great introspection and revelation about the fight. I really liked this letter because it actually seemed necessary. The other letters have been more expository (more for our benefit than for Pam's it seemed to me), but this one seemed to lay out things that Jim couldn't actually tell Pam when it happened. Really nice.
10 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2008 08:48 pm Title: July
This story deserves a ribbon. :)
Date: July 30, 2008 07:15 pm Title: July
So that's where your Scarfinski went -- Jim gave it to Pam!
Granny's restaurant is truly horrifying, BTW. And the moving in story is sweet. Now, about that shower...
Date: July 30, 2008 06:25 pm Title: July
Yikes! Still recovering from that photo of "Granny." Mox, it's apparent how much time and effort you put into each chapter. I, as a reader, really appreciate it. The details are amazing. I love the emotion that "Jim" puts into each letter. Great job, as always.
Date: July 30, 2008 06:24 pm Title: July
I've read all of your stories (first discovered them on FF.net), and I have to say that I absolutely love all of them. This one is no exception! You put such great detail into your work, you make us feel like we're right there with Jim and Pam. The added links to the pictures, and in the case of this story, the charms, is a very nice touch. Looking forward to more. Very well done, thanks for sharing!
Date: July 30, 2008 05:23 pm Title: July
Enjoy - and thanks ever so much for the reviews. It keeps me going when otherwise I want to tell myself "Why bother? Just keep it all in your head." In the immortal words of Jim Halpert "Take that back!" "unforgivable" "unforgivable" Mox In my opinion you are the best writer on this site. I thoroughly enjoy your work. How else would a crime fighter unwind? LOL Seriously your writing is awesome I hope you never stop.
Batman
Date: July 30, 2008 04:40 pm Title: July
I'm so glad you included a pic of Granny's, I was wondering if you had actually stopped there on one of your many road trips. I used to travel I-81 all the time when I went to Gettysburg, and I remember passing Frackville. If I'd only known...
And Jim giving Pam a Scarfinski just made me go Squeeeeee! all over my keyboard. Heeheehee. Yeah, Pam, you should definitely wear it to bed.
Will be patiently waiting for the next update gf.