Date: February 06, 2008 05:15 pm Title: February
Loved the first paragraph. The special necklaces get names and the conversation about Chester -- sooo cute! I like how you're re-writing the third season through the letters. Aw Valentine's Day sounds like it was so sweet. And I was touched by how Jim knew that Phyllis took ideas from Pam's wedding.
8 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2008 08:47 pm Title: February
I love that Jim had a scavenger hunt with the Care Bear valentines! I love the creativity that you've brought to this story. Handwritten letters rock and of course the charms are just the sweetest touch.
Date: January 09, 2008 01:25 pm Title: February
Oh that one brought tears to my eyes! This is such a fun story because of how you're working in all those little canon elements into the AU. I can't wait to find out what new twist you'll be coming up with!
Date: January 07, 2008 11:06 am Title: February
Oh, so sweet. Like Valentine's chocolates.
10 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2008 06:27 pm Title: February
I love that you are making so much less of season 3 being so full of heartache. I also love that the letters from Jim are filling it all in for us. And, yes, Gil is an ass. Thanks for sharing this, it is lovely :)
Date: January 01, 2008 09:53 am Title: February
I love that we are getting to see what S3 would have been like if Jim and Pam got together last Christmas. I also love seeing the year through Jim's eyes in his letters.
Another amazing story, moxie! I can't wait for more!
Date: January 01, 2008 06:40 am Title: February
Call me dense, but I just now realized after reading this how great this story is because we get to see how the second half of S3 would have played out in an idealized universe. Too bad we couldn't have seen Jim take Pam to the cocktail party; they would have had a blast mocking people and messing with Dwight.
You always write their dialogue so well, it's such a joy to read. Smooth, easy, sweet and romantic.
Parma: "I need to get a job like that." What? One where you get to kiss Jim Halpert all day? Overtime, anyone?
Now you've got me thinking. Will we ever see Jim and Pam attend another Office wedding together? Might be too repetitious for the show. Well, there's always their wedding...
So let's see. What happened in March? Oh yeah, the hiatus from hell. Little did we know what small peanuts that would turn out to be. :( Well, I'm sure you'll fill in the time nicely, Mox.
Date: December 31, 2007 06:51 pm Title: February
YAY! You made Phyllis' Wedding not suck!!!
Bonus points for Sam the Snowman. Does he look like Burl Ives?
Date: December 31, 2007 12:03 pm Title: February
Theres one word for your work, FANTASTIC!
Please continue,
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