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Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 05:24 pm Title: March

Aww, it sounds like they had a very trying month. How sad.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 13, 2008 09:04 pm Title: March

The dress was beautiful - the charm was adorable - and reading how their March was last year was great to see what could have been. I love that Jim took her to David Wallace's house - and was there for her for the pregnancy scare. I love how you're letting us see their life through his letters to her. So sweet.

Reviewer: thatswhatshesaid Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2008 05:04 pm Title: March

kudos on Americone Dream reference! my brother and I have been on very similar quests...

:-D great read. I was actually entertained w/o my adderall :-P

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2008 01:43 pm Title: March

I love how you told the story of the pregnancy scare in the letter format.  It was just the right amount of insider knowledge and confession.

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05, 2008 01:13 pm Title: March

Oooh, another story with "Jim in a towel".  We're gonna get spoiled, Mox, and expect it on the show. :)  And I'm sure he doesn't mind his "demanding" girlfriend.

Pam's dress is purdy.  Love the color.

Oh, you did include the cocktail party!  Yay!  I'm sure that they would have had a blast mocking people, as opposed to what happened on the show, with certain people pranking about their "history" while their boyfriend is trying so hard to obliterate his own history.  Not funny.

As Beeswax mentioned, I love the fact that he goes quite a bit farther out his way to get ice cream for Pam, than to get potato chips for Karen.  Holy crap.  That must have been a great drive down to Philly through the Poconos in the winter weather in the middle of the night.  Ah, true love.

I can picture Jim in RiteAid, hands in pockets, shoulders hunched to try to make himself disappear, licking his lips, nervously glancing up and down the aisle.  Yikes.  I'm willing to bet he wandered around the store a few times, trying to appear casual, sort of like me in The Gap.  Ha!

Glad that their first crisis brought them closer together.  I can see communication being an issue with them for awhile, until they come to realize that the other one isn't going to disappear if problems arise or disagreements occur.

Looking foward to the coming of spring.

 

 

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05, 2008 11:33 am Title: March

This story is a Jim-lover's dream.  This letter melted my heart. 

I also like how you erased the "Herr's Chips" search with what's-her-name and replaced it with an ice cream search for Pam.

Looking forward to April!

Reviewer: hues8 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05, 2008 11:17 am Title: March

Best chapter yet!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05, 2008 10:02 am Title: March

Glad I'm not the only one with preggers Pam on the brain ;-) Loved this: I remember throwing in a pack of Trident and a KitKat bar with the purchase, as if somehow it made me look more casual. Ha! Perfect Jim and very BOY. This story is still a happy pill, Mox. Is it April yet?

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05, 2008 09:48 am Title: March

Yay -- Pam made Jim take her to 'Blades of Glory' -- will he drag her to 'License to Wed'?

And the 'Knocked Up' DVD is too freaking funny.  (I just got it from NetFlix, so guess what I'm doing tonight!) 

Reviewer: WalkInLove Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 05, 2008 09:21 am Title: March

I'm not sure what to say about this that I haven't already told you, except to say, once again, I love it.  Jim's willingness to admit he was a bit disappointed she wasn't pregnant because he just knew this was it, was great.  I love that he gave her 'Knocked Up'.  Great touch.  Excellent job, as always.  Looking forward to the next 9 months ;)

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