Reviews For Twelve More Days
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Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 07:23 pm Title: April

My favorite line: You're the best thing in my life, and I've always known that – even before I knew for sure that you were going to be so completely in my life.. *sigh* Oh my, Roy did get a punch in! Wow. And bouncy castle confessions... great chapter. =)

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18, 2008 04:31 pm Title: April

This was definitely worth the wait!

Jim talking about depression was an interesting layer in the story.  I also liked the little bit of steam between Jim and Pam.

You take all the time you need for this story.  I'll wait for every word!

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18, 2008 10:36 am Title: April

I continue to be awed and amazed at how neatly you're fitting in the events from the show into this alternate universe.  It all makes complete and total sense, too!  I liked the mention of Jim going to therapy.  It really does seem like something that he needed and that helped a lot.  I'm thoroughly enjoying this!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18, 2008 08:52 am Title: April

Awww. So sweet. I love that he remembers that she's his best friend, and why. It's nice to get another chapter!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 18, 2008 07:23 am Title: April

I've missed you, Moxie!  So nice to see an update.  Reading the letters along with Pam make me feel like the proverbial fly on the wall : )  The castle charm is the best one yet.  While I would hope that their life together would be all sunshine and rainbows, it's refreshing to read about their struggles and how they get through them together.  The pregnancy scare and Jim's depression really add to the depth of the story.  More soon please?

Reviewer: hamrensel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17, 2008 10:54 pm Title: April

I love this series. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon.

Reviewer: hues8 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17, 2008 07:30 pm Title: April

Another fantastic chapter!!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17, 2008 07:06 pm Title: April

So glad you updated since I completely lost where this story was.  I caught up now. Great job.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 17, 2008 06:56 pm Title: April

I probably shouldn't admit this - but I still haven't seen the episode with Roy going after Jim and Michael and the castle yet - I found S3 so angsty that there were several shows I just never watched.  (I know, I'm a dork!) But I love your April - the letter showed us so much about Jim and how he felt back then. And, if we want to talk about the universe sighing and then shouting out "Finally" - well, we all heard it at the end of S3, didn't we?  The "trinkets" are so neat, and each charm is even more charming than the prior one. (Pardon the pun). I can't wait till tomorrow in the story.  (And speak of the devil, Roy's on Gray's tonight. )

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17, 2008 06:27 pm Title: April

Ah, rewriting The Negotiation.  Niiiiice.  This time Jim gets in a punch.  I suspect I'd have found you irresistible even without narcotics.  That Jim, such a smoothie.

And the bouncy castle.  *Insert smutty thoughts here*  Love, love, LOVE the charm.  Sigh.  Also love that they are having some serious heart-to-hearts and trusting each other.  

Damn I miss those two. 

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