Date: May 05, 2008 06:39 am Title: Chapter 1
This story makes me all warm in my heart.....sign....
This is so romantic, it would definately kick my ass! You are great as usual-more please! C'mom, another chapter.....surely Pam will be scared planning this wedding-You must write so that us JamFans will read about it...u know u want to..............
we want u too......................
9 [Report This]Date: May 01, 2008 10:38 am Title: Chapter 1
No wonder it's a members choice. It's completely awesome. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Date: January 15, 2008 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Because somehow he’d convinced her she was worth all that he gave her.
Poor Pam and her low self-esteem. I'm glad she got some of it back. I enjoyed this.
Date: December 26, 2007 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW. What a complete story this was. It's rare that I find myself truly and completely satisfied by a one-shot (even though i write them myself), but this was just so amazingly complete. Pam came full circle, and there's something about the intimacy of this -- the words you chose that just so clearly painted the picture of who they are.
Date: December 25, 2007 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
:D.
A beautiful Christmas gift- thank you.
It certainly left me satisfied and smiling.
GS
xxx
Date: December 24, 2007 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for the warmth and intimacy of this beautiful story. The writing, as always, flows and forms something so rich with emotion and detail. Lovely characterization, too. I really, really enjoyed this.
8 [Report This]Date: December 24, 2007 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was lovely and romantic and I loved it. Thanks and Merry Christmas!
Date: December 24, 2007 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
awhhh ! this is TOO perfect ! :D *sigh* great job !
Date: December 24, 2007 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm at work (again) and it's gonna be a hellish night in the OR, but I had to write a quick thank you for this absolutely gorgeous story. Christmas eve proposal....gah, just love every single word of this. You're awesome unfold!
Date: December 24, 2007 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is like a deep inhale after holding your breath too long. It is like life itself returning. Beautiful. Merry Christmas!
Date: December 24, 2007 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Such big emotion in such small, delicate detail.This line: And when he finally asked her with the timid voice of a little boy...says so much more about Jim's state of mind than long passages, explicating his 'feelings.' And this is so elegantly phrased: Later, half drunk on the beach, he’d told that spot behind her ear that he loved it and she could only laugh, her hands moving against his freckled shoulders. Spare and so immediately Pam. One brief moment like this, that's truly 'written,' is more moving to me than 10 chapters of being 'told.' Just lovely.
10 [Report This]Date: December 24, 2007 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story was perfect. Your descriptions were beautiful and the characters were spot-on! I was trying to find a favourite line, but there's too many. Oh, you just made my christmas eve even better! lol
Date: December 24, 2007 11:36 am Title: Chapter 1
That was beautiful. Unfold, your stories are so poignant even in so few words. Thanks.
10 [Report This]Date: December 24, 2007 11:06 am Title: Chapter 1
*Sniff*
It's a little dusty in here, right? I mean... yeah, it's gotta be the dust. Just a little bit in my eye.
Oh who am I kidding, that was just awesome and wonderful and everything.
Date: December 24, 2007 11:02 am Title: Chapter 1
I <3 unfold!
(I feel doubly cheated out of my S4 Xmas!!!)
Date: December 24, 2007 10:40 am Title: Chapter 1
*Click* Just added that one to my favorites. Such a sweet, romantic story. Perfect.
10 [Report This]Date: December 24, 2007 10:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Unfold, you make me so happy! I so love your stories. This was so romantic and wonderful. Thanks for the Christmas present.