Date: February 20, 2008 05:59 pm Title: The Forgotten Papers
I've really enjoyed reading this.... checking every day for new updates. I'm sorry to hear there's only once chapter left, but you've given us a lot of good reading. Thanks.
Author's Response: :DDD aw thank you =] and never fear, i'm always writing sooo they'll be others stories on here just look out for them thanks for reading!!<3
10 [Report This]Date: February 09, 2008 05:55 pm Title: The Forgotten Papers
It would be out of character for Jim to tell Roy, but than again it would be nice to see him do it!
Author's Response: :DD thanks for the input!
10 [Report This]Date: January 30, 2008 07:55 pm Title: The Forgotten Papers
fantastic work. I am liking this story more and more with each new turn. :)
Date: January 30, 2008 07:09 pm Title: The Forgotten Papers
Thanks for the update. I'm still reading and enjoying every word. You're doing a great job!
Author's Response: :DDD aw thank you!
Date: January 27, 2008 03:13 pm Title: The Forgotten Papers
I just read this today. Don't get discouraged by the lack of reviews. Maybe some are like me who just figured out how to write a review. :) Anyway, You're doing a great job and I've gotten butterflies in my stomach more than a few times while reading it. I can't wait for your next update. Keep them coming! :)
Date: January 26, 2008 08:53 pm Title: The Forgotten Papers
This is a good story please continue.
Date: January 26, 2008 08:40 pm Title: The Forgotten Papers
this is a good story. many are visitors to the site and therefore can't leave comments. but this is a nice story, and i hope you don't get discouraged by the lack of commenting. i hope you finish!
Date: January 23, 2008 04:35 am Title: The Forgotten Papers
I really like where this is going, and how you show that they can't really go on that long showing that they are angry at each other. I am looking forward to the next chapter! :D
Author's Response: awww thank you :D i'm glad ur enjoying it
10 [Report This]Date: January 22, 2008 06:43 pm Title: The Forgotten Papers
Really good stuff here...a little bolder Jim than we usually see, but still believable. I'm definiely invested.
10 [Report This]Date: January 18, 2008 11:28 am Title: The Forgotten Papers
You got me hooked. Hopefully when it's all said and done, Roy will be the only one fuming. Looking forward to more.
Date: January 18, 2008 09:48 am Title: The Forgotten Papers
Me likey. Can't wait for more. Excellent stuff!
Date: January 18, 2008 08:59 am Title: The Forgotten Papers
I really like this one so far. I hope you countinue soon.
8 [Report This]Date: January 17, 2008 07:11 pm Title: The Forgotten Papers
"She was afraid if she made eye contact with Roy too long Jim’s words would ring in her ears…and she would realize swaying is dancing."
Awesome line, awesome beginning. I can't wait to see where you go with this because anger this intense just has to lead to something good, right?