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Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2008 02:29 pm Title: The Realization

Loved this one from beginning to end.  I am looking forward to date #2!

Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2008 03:43 am Title: The Realization

The entire story is so very well written and I love the way you began the first Chapter "Realization":

 

All thought stopped when the note fell out of the folder and into his lap.

“Don’t forget us when you’re famous – Pam”

It was the sum of what he’d be leaving behind.

Her.
Her smile.
Her friendship.
Her presence.
All the possibilities.

 

Very, very evocative. 

Reviewer: hamrensel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2008 07:42 am Title: The Realization

I really loved the story. I can't wait to read your series on the date.

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