Reviews For It's Their Turn
Reviewer: iheartcreed Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24, 2008 12:44 pm Title: She Fills His Vision
Date: January 24, 2008 12:44 pm Title: She Fills His Vision
Loved that the focus was on him being lost in her, but it seems odd that he didn't mention to her how nice she looked.
Author's Response: It's coming up;-)
Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24, 2008 05:46 am Title: She Fills His Vision
Date: January 24, 2008 05:46 am Title: She Fills His Vision
I love this chapter. Simply perfect. Jim shook himself mentally. “All set?” I really like that image.
Reviewer: skeber Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24, 2008 05:36 am Title: She Fills His Vision
Date: January 24, 2008 05:36 am Title: She Fills His Vision
Keep it coming!! It's great!!!
Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23, 2008 09:53 pm Title: She Fills His Vision
Date: January 23, 2008 09:53 pm Title: She Fills His Vision
Aww, they're so sweet. I love how nervous they are.
Reviewer: Annika Signed 
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Date: January 23, 2008 09:34 pm Title: She Fills His Vision
10 [Report This]Date: January 23, 2008 09:34 pm Title: She Fills His Vision
I'm loving this story! You're doing so well capturing the characters. I loved the "let's do this Beesly." It's such a Jim thing to say! Can't wait for the date!