10 [Report This]Date: January 30, 2009 03:03 pm Title: Goodnight
i am truly and utterly speechless.
this is exactly, in every way imaginable, how i pictured their first date.
a little nervous, but not awkward, and containing a reemergence of their playfulness and jokes.
this was, in a word, perfect.
i'm off to go see what other brilliant things you've written.
9 [Report This]Date: May 07, 2008 07:23 pm Title: Goodnight
I enjoyed this date thoroughly. Love the waiter bit, my fave part though cheesy was the Jim sized hole in her soul. I have written some stuff too but yours is the first I ever commented on and I hope to post a story of my own soon. Hope you read it and tell me what you think. Nice work.
Date: January 29, 2008 12:22 pm Title: Goodnight
Brava! Beautiful. And good for Jim, having some nice physical work to do to work the kinks out of the system.
Date: January 29, 2008 08:03 am Title: Goodnight
sooo good...i love how they leave it...i think that they would kinda keep it low key for the first date, but then it is all out JAM!!
10 [Report This]Date: January 29, 2008 05:46 am Title: Goodnight
Boy oh boy, how I loved these two most-recent chapters. They make me think of old Hollywood romance. Sigh. Can you tell I'm enjoying this?
Date: January 29, 2008 05:29 am Title: Goodnight
I love this story! I can't wait for the next part!!!
Date: January 28, 2008 10:29 pm Title: Goodnight
I love this whole story. It is fanastic! I can't wait to see the second date story.
8 [Report This]Date: January 28, 2008 10:00 pm Title: Goodnight
By the time I finished reading the latest chapter a new one would already be up. Absolutely fantastic.
Date: January 28, 2008 09:41 pm Title: Goodnight
that was such a great series! I loved it. I also loved the frequent updates!
Author's Response: Thanks:}I got on this site to find a story on the first date. When I had trouble finding one that matched what was in my head, it just came rolling out. I've been writing this thing on scrap paper and the back of envelopes whenever I'm not busy.