Date: January 28, 2008 10:50 am Title: Opus 1
Definitely not too weird of a concept! I like it. I figured I'd just pick a character and then once it became clear who it was I could go back and revisit. I picked Angela straight away! But the fun thing is that a lot of this could have been Pam.
Author's Response: some of it definitely could've been Pam ;-) Glad you got it right, though.
10 [Report This]Date: January 26, 2008 06:06 am Title: Opus 1
No, not too weird a concept at all, stablergirl! Please do continue!
So I just found this story this morning, and I'm very intrigued at the concept! This first chapter is about Angela, right? (I swear I didn't peek at other people's guesses, either! :P)
I really like the way in which you showed how lonely she is without Dwight. I'm a HUGE supporter of Dwangela (JAM who? haha), and I desperately want them to get back together on the show.
My favorite line: "she had judged herself on her sound judgment." So funny, and so Angela. She really does enjoy being judged, doesn't she? :)
Off to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement, Mose! I'm a big Dwangela fan too, especially now that with the writer's strike I've basically been watching season three over and over and they're just so great together those two. Anyway thanks for reviewing!! Glad you found this this morning.
Date: January 25, 2008 07:44 pm Title: Opus 1
Wonderful concept and beautifully written. I would love to read some from other characters.
(I'm assuming this is Angela? Great take on her character, btw)
Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you like this idea!! I wasn't sure how it would end up going over, but it seems to be doing ok. Thank you so much for the review and for the compliments and I'm glad you liked my take on this one ;-)
Date: January 25, 2008 04:45 pm Title: Opus 1
Im going to say the first one is angela and the second one is stanley (although at first I thought it was kevin). This is really good I love puzzles and this is great writing
Author's Response: I love puzzles too!! And yeah I tried to make the beginning of this one pretty ambiguous, just for fun. Glad you like the writing and the premise and thanks so much for reviewing, i love it!
Date: January 24, 2008 03:20 pm Title: Opus 1
I like it a lot. Please keep them coming. I can't wait to see how long it takes me to get the next one!
Author's Response: lol thanks!! I know, it's so mysterious ;-)
Date: January 24, 2008 11:39 am Title: Opus 1
You really are able to get way inside these characters; I'm reminded of your Michael piece ofrom a while back. I tend to not be very sympathetic to Angela, but this had me really feeling for her. As always, of course, your writing is exceptional.
Author's Response:
Thanks, brokenloon! I'm glad you're reading this one...that means I can send new chapters to you for beta work :-) :-)
Date: January 24, 2008 09:42 am Title: Opus 1
I guess Angela- who else would call herself "Righteousness"? And who else would be the first thought for a series called "Hymns"? This is beautiful, the idea that she has to face herself and even considers that an act of will instead of humility. Simply beautiful- can't wait for what's next!
Author's Response: lol yeah by righteousness it's totally obvious ;-) Thank you so much for the nice review! I'm not sure who will be next, but hopefully I'll have another chapter tonight or tomorrow.
9 [Report This]Date: January 24, 2008 05:39 am Title: Opus 1
You don't even have to ask, stablergirl; I'm easy : ) I agree regarding Karen and Angela. I was a little unsure at first. Great concept. More, I hope?
Author's Response: lol yep I've decided to do more. Glad you're liking the idea and the first little bit!!
Date: January 24, 2008 12:35 am Title: Opus 1
This is so great! Definitely continue -- you could take this some really brilliant places.
Author's Response: Thanks! I decided to keep going with it so hopefully there will be another chapter soon.
Date: January 23, 2008 10:07 pm Title: Opus 1
Too weird a concept to continue?
Oh my gosh, no! This is a great idea; it's such a fun way to explore the differences and similarities between the characters. At times Karen and Angela are semi-alike in their inner-strength for example. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Agreed! There is a definite Karen/Angela similarity. Thanks for the encouragement! I'm going to keep going I think.
10 [Report This]Date: January 23, 2008 09:57 pm Title: Opus 1
i think it's Angela
Author's Response: ;-)