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Reviewer: office_romance Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2008 02:48 pm Title: Take you out dancing just so he can hold you close

Oh my gosh!!! I love this story!!!!

Reviewer: Catie9 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2008 04:52 pm Title: Take you out dancing just so he can hold you close

What I would give to get a dance lesson from Jim Halpert.

You and me both, sister! These little chapters make me so excited and so heartbroken at the same time, which I suppose is the point! Great stuff!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, they've been fun to write :)  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2008 03:54 pm Title: Take you out dancing just so he can hold you close

zzzzziiip!

Know what that was the sound of? That was the sound of me zipping my lips about my opinion of whether Jim can really dance. ;)

Because this is your story, Swiff, and I will NOT be the one to harsh your mellow! Instead, I will point out some of the wonderfully cute things about this chapter, such Jim's consterflusterification (what? It's a word, look it up) at the words "passion party," Pam's almost immediate "yes," and Pam's simuldorkisness (Again, it's a real word, I swear) when they first start to dance. :)

See? And not once did I say anything about whether Jim can dance. ;)  



Author's Response: Mose, I appreciate you zipping your lid.  Who knows, Jim could be a great dancer!  I mean, look at all those guys on Dancing with the Stars.  They are totally straight *cough*  Either way, glad you enjoyed this flufferonious (I can make up words too) piece and thanks for all the support!

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