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I love this story it's really great! But just an FYI you might want to do a bit better research into the area, because I'm from the Northeastern PA area and Carbondale doesn't really have good schools at all. But other than that which really has nothing to do with the story (just a little something that bothers me since I'm from there)but the actual writing is great! =)

Author's Response: Thanks for your review.  I admit I took some literary licence using Carbondale because it was a location readers might be familiar with since Oscar has stated that he lives there and Ryan has also mentioned it on the show.  I did a bit of research and that's how I came up with Jefferson Heights and Clarks Summit.   I'm glad you liked the story, overalll.