Date: April 24, 2008 12:01 pm Title: Message Received
Okay, the entire first pararaph of description was great because I could TOTALLY see it in my mind, and it was kind of like I was intrudin on this moment (in the best possible way)
"She was moving towed him with quick" towed him? :? Is that supposed to be toward? Or am I just really really bad with words? Either is possible.
I knew that the offices were other branches (just proves how much I watch the show), but I wasn't sure how Pam was doing it. But that is clever. Very awesome Pam.
"“I told you that I needed more than that, Pam.”" This just gave me such a pause because I had to take a breath and relive casino night and remember that this wasn't casino night.
Date: March 07, 2008 06:15 pm Title: Message Received
Oh my!
I just discovered this story of yours and what an incredible read. I love that you delve into the effect of the documentary on Jim and Pam. It allows us to see them from a different angle.
Sooo looking forward to the next chapters.
8 [Report This]Date: March 07, 2008 11:59 am Title: Message Received
Yay, a good heart-to-heart talk! Whoo! I love these two...
--Strider
10 [Report This]Date: March 07, 2008 06:28 am Title: Message Received
What a perfect way to end this chapter. Love the little network of receptionists. Oh, it needs a lot of smuff. I'm a smuff whore. Bring it.
Date: March 07, 2008 05:34 am Title: Message Received
OMG! Ok, I love that you put a stake in the heart of the PLoD.
Next squee: OMG! The Xmas card!!!!!
And yay for Pam just jumping in with her 'fire-walk' speech, er, sort of.
(And we need a lot of smuff -- there's still a month to go before we get to see new episodes. You can put it in a separate chapter if you fear it will offend the delicate sensibilities of, er, someone).
Date: March 07, 2008 05:21 am Title: Message Received
Oh wow good chapter! Please don't leave us hanging for too long?
Date: March 06, 2008 09:22 pm Title: Message Received
Ok, I never review. I know, bad reader. But um... how much smuff does it require? Tons. Tons. I live for smuff. =) Of course, I did just get done watching the rerun of Money... so that may have something to do with it...
10 [Report This]Date: March 06, 2008 09:14 pm Title: Message Received
Crap. HOLY CRAP. GiTC, not only do you floor me with a kickass wonderful parking lot scene, but you end it by resurrecting the Christmas card? You know what I'm about to say, as it's old hat by now, but who cares, I'll shout it from the rooftops: You slay me. And what a way to go.
I love this: "On most days, she could see ghosts of themselves still clad in shiny blue dresses and dress-sweaters haunting that spot, reluctant to leave until the events of that night were put right."
But then I love anything you write. This is just lovely; bravo for another fabulous chapter! ---CH