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Reviewer: abrighterdiscontent Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 13, 2008 10:21 am Title: Chapter 6

I can't wait to find out what happens next in your story! Great writing, and great plot!

Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2008 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 6

I love this story!  But shouldn't Jim be in studio working on that rendering?  I want hot Jam studio sex.  Jim tired from a double all-nighter, trying to finish rendering a section, everybody else has gone home, Pam comes over with coffee... I can see it.

Reviewer: vodka_rebellion Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2008 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 6

Aw, you've made me sad for Katy.  I've been Katy!  

 Which isn't to say I'm not totally rooting for Pam and Jim, obviously.  I love the concept of the story.  It really works, and I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 6 [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2008 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 6

OMG!! Jim is having sex with Katy!!!! Meaningless sex, but sex just the same!  What will Pam do when she finds out? And you know she's going to find out. 

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