Date: March 26, 2008 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 33
I'm really enjoying this story, but I feel like I have to clarify something - the morning after pill won't actually make you not pregnant if you already are, it just keeps sperm from fertilizing the egg. You're thinking of the abortion pill, which isn't sold in the US. The morning after pill does not kill anything. Sorry to nitpick, but I actually teach classes on this sort of thing to incoming college freshmen, and it's a dangerous misunderstanding that keeps a lot of girls from taking the morning after pill.
Seriously though - great story, I'm really enjoying it! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for clarifying and thanks for reading! Clearly I've gone through 3 1/2 years of college without knowing that, and I was a bio major for two of those. lol(sad really). But I do know a few girls that have thought the same thing that Pam thought, mainly because the clinics didn't really explain anything, just handed the box of pills over and told them how to take them. Thanks again, I might work that into next chapter or the one after so Pam can throw that back in Angela's face.
Date: March 22, 2008 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 33
I look forward to this story more than any other and I don't usually like alternate universe stories. I hope you post more really soon. I'm still confused over if she threw up the pills or not. I read it again and all it says is that it made her sick. Does that mean they came back up or they already dissolved in her system before she started throwing up? Or does she even know and she's just assuming?
Author's Response: sorry if that it wasn't clear. They were already dissolved and in her system. Throwing up is a side effect of the pill so it doesn't affect the pills at all. thanks for reading!
Date: March 22, 2008 10:21 am Title: Chapter 33
great job...love that she turned to Angela cause she was the only semi normal person to ask...gotta love them all and all their quirks...can't wait for more
10 [Report This]Date: March 22, 2008 10:09 am Title: Chapter 33
Wow. Just wow.
I really liked the Jan and Pam interaction. I loved how you made it believable and sincere.
I hope that you don't keep Jim and Pam apart to long though, even though I am really enjoying the angst right now.