10 [Report This]Date: August 12, 2010 07:04 am Title: Chapter 40
Wow! AMAZING! This was your first? More than Amazing! There is something SO special about you writing, I seriously never want the stories to end! I AM excited that this one has a sequel! You truly are gifted!
Date: April 16, 2008 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 40
Well done! I am was sad at first that it was over, and I was gonna beg you for an epilogue, then I caught chapter 1 of the sequel...your the devil! I love it...
9 [Report This]Date: April 16, 2008 08:11 am Title: Chapter 40
I am so going to be late to work, but I don't care. I had to read this last chapter and review. I'm okay with not reading about funny/cute road trip stories. I'm even okay with not reading about how you envision Jim proposing. Pam's seen the little black box; she knows she loves him and he loves her and that they are going to get married. We know Jim's got his dream job. What I would really like to see is what you envision for Pam's future besides Jim by her side. If I remember correctly, she didn't apply for any schools out there, just looked schools up on the net. She doesn't have a job lined up for the summer, so we don't know what she's leaning toward career wise. I see you haven't marked this story as complete. What I'd really like is an epilogue and I'm not above groveling for one. Please, please, please let us see a glimpse of what you see for their future. Forget what your beta said. (Sorry beta.) Oh, and thought you'd like to know that this one's been added to my Favorite Stories. I've really enjoyed this one.
Author's Response: Oh... don't be late for work, but no epilogue... just a whole new story!
Date: April 16, 2008 07:37 am Title: Chapter 40
so good...really wanted to see the proposal, but that is life...hope to read more of your work in the future!!
Date: April 16, 2008 07:13 am Title: Chapter 40
this is a great chapter and the ending is adorable, but I really wanted to see the proposal!
Date: April 16, 2008 03:15 am Title: Chapter 40
Wait a minute... that's the end? Like the END end? Aren't you forgetting one more chapter with the PROPOSAL?? I liked this chapter a lot, but seriously - you can NOT end it there.