Reviews For Sleepwalk
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Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2006 06:37 am Title: Chapter 1

"A hot night and a moonlit lake." You had me at that. The rest of the story was just frosting on the cake! And it was tasty. tasty frosting. 

Author's Response: Hee, thanks, Par5! ;)

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2006 06:26 am Title: Chapter 1

wonderful. I love wet pam/jim

Author's Response: Me, too! Thanks, gotkona ;)

Reviewer: sicokitty Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2006 06:22 am Title: Chapter 1

*fans self*

that was hot.  very hot.   you should possibly exploit this weakness more.



Author's Response:

Jamsploitation fic? I can get behind that. TWSS. Thanks, sicokitty! ;)

Reviewer: yippee Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2006 06:14 am Title: Chapter 1

Heee! Yay for fun banter & hot underwater make-out sessions. As always, love the way you write these two :)

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks, yippee ;)

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2006 05:47 am Title: Chapter 1

Loved every word of it.  Brilliant!

Author's Response: Thanks, bitterpill! :D

Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2006 05:35 am Title: Chapter 1

Damn you woman! You're so good with the imagery, it pains me. Hee. I loved this. Pam and Jim should only make out in water, I've decided.

Author's Response: I agree! About the making out in water. WetJam is hotJam. Thanks, pennylane ;)

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2006 03:53 am Title: Chapter 1

Lovely and erotic and nicely understated too. I like how Pam is a bit bold here, able to abandon herself to the moment for once...even if she is only 'sleepwalking.'

Author's Response: Thanks, Colette! I like boldPam ;)

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2006 03:48 am Title: Chapter 1

This is nothing short of delicious.  And I thank you for keeping me from spraining my fingers clicking on the link.

My favorite I think: When they meet hers again, they hold the moon.

You paint such a lovely picture with words Shan.



Author's Response: Thanks, and you're welcome - just looking out for you guys ;)  Glad you liked that line - it's one of my favorites.

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2006 03:16 am Title: Chapter 1

The imagery was beautiful, and the makeout session was hot! 

I'd love a second chapter, with Dwight's reaction, and some sort of aftermath to the making-out...?



Author's Response: Thanks, Lissa! I'll think about it :)

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