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Reviewer: bebitched Signed [Report This]
Date: March 07, 2008 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

*cries* How can you do this to me? Oh beautiful pain. You write so beautifully and yet... ouch.

Author's Response: i tried to maim, that was the point :)  

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2008 06:52 am Title: Chapter 1

God, you hit me right in my grief bone.  So sad, but so good.  Love your work.



Author's Response: oh the grief bone is so tough!  sorry about that :)

Reviewer: 09imagine09 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2008 04:49 am Title: Chapter 1

omg, that's so funny! I actually live in Amsterdam! Just let me say that people don't throw bikes in the canals all the time though ;) Really good story, It's really sad, but you've written it very well. I do think you mean he took a ferry FROM Den Helder though. Because Den Helder is on the mainland, but you can take a ferry there to the island Texel. I loved it, you should continue!!

Author's Response: when i was studying abroad (spending 3 weeks in utrecht), we had a couple of trips to amsterdam and managed to see folks dragging the canals.  i can't imagine that it happens that often, but i love that tidbit.  and thanks for your correction.  it's been awhile since i've been there and my geography is super fuzzy...

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