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Reviewer: Abigail Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 13, 2008 07:48 am Title: Chapter 20

This last batch was awesome. The "Best/Worst First Date" conversation was spot on! You pegged Jim perfectly..using humor as a way to cover his insecurity and disappointment and I'll just bet that was when Pam first realized she had gotten herself into something she couldn't face. This is where the denial started. Bravo!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you're still enjoying these. And I totally agree with you about Pam starting to deny things from this point on. That's really what I wanted to focus on in this, and especially the next batch of chapters, so I'm glad you picked up on it. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Abigail!

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