Date: June 07, 2008 10:00 pm Title: prying hearts
oo angry pam. very intense. love it!
Date: June 07, 2008 09:49 pm Title: the Dundies ruined my life
oh poor jim!
Date: June 07, 2008 09:28 pm Title: they don't know how to do normal
oh no. I sense some angst to come. fantastic chapter
Date: June 07, 2008 09:15 pm Title: some people might call us a family
so cute. so freaking cute! this story is beyond amazing
Date: June 07, 2008 09:06 pm Title: she has your hair
I can just picture the cutest baby when you describe her!
Date: June 07, 2008 09:01 pm Title: Little Beesly
aw this is so good! :D Sorry I didn't check it out sooner, my mistake
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2008 08:50 pm Title: stains of our past
I read this chatper once before and it didn't really catch my eye (sorry!) but I saw you on the recent page and I thought I'd give it another try I reread it, and really liked it, and now I'm going to sit down and finally read all of it! :D
Author's Response: I'm glad you decided to reread. I love new readers.
Date: June 07, 2008 07:09 pm Title: he would do anything
Now here comes the nail biting, a bit ominous me thinks. But I really do just love this story so much! *BIG HUGS*
Date: June 07, 2008 01:47 pm Title: he would do anything
Oh, I have a bad feeling about this. I really thought Pam was going to say no...
Good chapter!
Date: June 07, 2008 01:00 pm Title: he would do anything
oh wow...loved the party...loved creed of course...can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks, the party was so much fun to think up... wish I could have been there.
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2008 12:11 pm Title: he would do anything
I like overwhelmingly long chapters. I like all chapters. I'm really excited for the next chapter, in fact I think you should update right about now! :)
Great chapter! Jim is oh so sweet, and I loved Dwight. Like, with a passion.
Date: June 07, 2008 10:40 am Title: he would do anything
Oh, I really liked this chapter! Pam is making me feel weird though - that she's not doing this because she wants to but because Jim is better than Roy. Can't wait to see the morning after, so that perhaps they can get on the same page :)
Author's Response: You are so right, but I'll give you a little spoiler... that won't be the thing that causes issues in that house!
Date: June 07, 2008 08:38 am Title: he would do anything
I, for one, really appreciate your ending on a good note. So glad Roy's gone (at least I hope he's gone)
This made me smile: Okay, so maybe he was deluding himself, and what Jon said really struck a chord, but the pessimist in him was currently being held under water in a half filled pool by the optimist in him.
Nice job!
Author's Response: Thanks, I will try my hardest to end the next chapter on a good note as well because we are almost done.
Date: June 07, 2008 08:20 am Title: stains of our past
As much as I love a happy story I can't help but think trouble is coming. There has to be some issues coming up moving into that house. I love it though!
Author's Response: There will be some issues... whether they are small or big issues will be the real question.
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2008 07:29 am Title: he would do anything
Great chapter. I'll be very interested to see what they dynamics are as they live together in Jim's house.
10 [Report This]Date: June 06, 2008 10:58 pm Title: what's mine is mine
oh man you had me crying at this chapter! jim is such a sweetheart; he is just so caring and sensitive and i love it. keep it up!
Author's Response: thank you! I will certainly try... not to make you cry, but I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Date: May 30, 2008 07:45 pm Title: what's done in the dark will be brought to the light
Love it, as always!
Date: May 30, 2008 01:47 pm Title: what's done in the dark will be brought to the light
Ha! He really stuck it to Roy..oh wait he actually stuck it to Pam..oh wait..um Great update..
Author's Response: That was by far one of the best reviews.
10 [Report This]Date: May 30, 2008 12:17 pm Title: what's done in the dark will be brought to the light
Good work
Date: May 30, 2008 11:01 am Title: stains of our past
I totally trust you when it comes to the Roy situation. I hope he doesn't present too much trouble for Jim/Pam. This is just such a great story.
Date: May 29, 2008 11:42 pm Title: what's done in the dark will be brought to the light
Great chapter. Apt title too. Glad you were in the mood you were in. They sure are making up for lost time aren't they? :) Good to hear that Roy is a FORMER Dunder Mifflin employee. I was going to scream if I read that Roy found a new job there. Pam's not the only one who doesn't want Franny calling Roy Daddy. I can't wait to hear Franny call Jim Daddy. I love Jim's stance with regard to this Roy business. Stand your ground Jim! Finally, Jim's told Pam those three important words. I'm almost as happy to hear it as she is! Excellent job italianfood. No worries about future chapters being an interesting trip. I'm completely confident you're up to the challenge.
Author's Response: Thanks for the three reviews in one night! I'm glad you enjoyed the last few chapters.
10 [Report This]Date: May 29, 2008 10:52 pm Title: what's done in the dark will be brought to the light
I recently caught up on this story and I have to say that I absolutely love it! I am usually not much of an AU fan, but this story really grabbed me. You've portrayed the characters very realistically and the story has just the right mix of humor and emotion. Great work! As for this chapter, the Michael/90210 line had me laughing out loud :)
Date: May 29, 2008 10:30 pm Title: what's mine is mine
Oh, this chapter made me feel so bad for Pam. Her little breakdown when Roy was leaving was so believable. So I can see where Jim gets his charm from, his dad. So cute. Sorry, but I felt the mom came off like kind of a drunk, not that it ruined the chapter or anything, I just thought it was weird. But I did enjoy Pam's interaction with Jim's family. I loved how Jim took care of Pam and Franny after they got home, once again proving that he's a keeper. And Pam told Jim I love you FIRST. Yay!
Date: May 29, 2008 10:10 pm Title: 6 lbs 4 oz bouncing bundle of nerves
Jim's discovered Pam's love for art. Looking forward to reading how Jim helps Pam rediscover her love for it. And them not actually having sex, but sharing the same bed for over six weeks? Sorry, but I find that hard to believe. Who'd be able to resist Jim? Not me! ;) Ha! I'd like to take a Jim Halpert day! Boy, Roy sure did a number on Pam's self confidence. Please don't let Roy hang around too long. And Sara, you make me want to slap her. Pam needs to stand up to that girl, even though Sara believes that she's trying to help her sis. Glad that Jim's not going to disappear while Roy does whatever he's going to try to do. So glad to see these long chapters from you. I'm always checking the "Most Recent" for updates from you.
9 [Report This]Date: May 29, 2008 08:46 pm Title: what's done in the dark will be brought to the light
Pam loves Jim. Jim loves Pam. I love italianfood.
It's all guuuud! [/michael]
Thanks for writing such a captivating and entertaining story. Love the quick updates and nice long chapters too.