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Reviewer: Sammie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2008 08:37 pm Title: they don't know how to do normal

This is the first JAM fanfic I have ever read, and I have to say that I'm awfully impressed. Of course I have already fallen in love with our "real" Jim Halpert that we see on TV every week, but your amazing story made me fall in love with the "alternate universe" version of Jim Halpert. I didn't even know that was possible. I have only read the first 6 chapters so far, but the Jim in the first 5 absolutely broke my heart and I loved him for it. You have created such a great story that rivals the one of "The Office." It's excellent. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really excited that you chose my story to be your first JAM fic. I hope you continue to like the direction that the story takes.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really excited that you chose my story to be your first JAM fic. I hope you continue to like the direction that the story takes.

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2008 06:40 pm Title: stains of our past

Yeah another great update.  I LOVE this story so much.  I can't wait to see how Pam handles Roy.

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2008 05:46 pm Title: 6 lbs 4 oz bouncing bundle of nerves

I actually really loved this chapter. I'm a little leery of Roy just showing up and sorta stalking all her phones, but I really love Jim being there for Pam without being insecure or jealous really. And I love them presenting a united front to Roy, with Jim holding Franny. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: hues8 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2008 05:27 pm Title: 6 lbs 4 oz bouncing bundle of nerves

Go away Roy!

But I do love this story!

Author's Response: I'll pass that message onto Roy for you.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2008 07:16 am Title: 6 lbs 4 oz bouncing bundle of nerves

Wow...quite a strong start : )  And it stayed strong.  I really didn't expect the reappearance of Roy. 

Love that Jealous Jim:  He wanted to help her in the right direction because Franny was his, not Roy’s. Pam was his. Roy didn’t deserve them, and he was definitely going to let her know if she pushed this any further. For now he would just be the supportive boyfriend.  Oooo!   Anxiously awaiting more...

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2008 06:12 am Title: 6 lbs 4 oz bouncing bundle of nerves

Not sure why but I absolutely adored this chapter.  THe whole story is wonderful - you express the complex emotions of Jim and Pam in a real and touching way.

Reviewer: skeber Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2008 10:22 pm Title: 6 lbs 4 oz bouncing bundle of nerves

Hurry please! can't wait to see what happens!

Reviewer: Ellie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2008 10:21 pm Title: 6 lbs 4 oz bouncing bundle of nerves

Yay! I'm glad this story is being updated again. It's one of my favorites.

I was actually looking for it about a week ago, weird coincidence...

Update soon please!

Reviewer: malaz85 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2008 10:13 pm Title: 6 lbs 4 oz bouncing bundle of nerves

Waiting anxiously for the next chapter!

Reviewer: iwantphillyjim Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2008 10:09 pm Title: 6 lbs 4 oz bouncing bundle of nerves

Excellent chapter, that beginning, oh lord! and just the whole thing. yes!

Reviewer: untherapy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2008 10:00 pm Title: 6 lbs 4 oz bouncing bundle of nerves

yes please don't! This is one of my fave stories

Reviewer: hellogoodbye Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2008 11:54 am Title: under where?

I loved this chapter; I love this whole story. I have a soft spot for Jim and babies, and I love how the three became a sort of family before anything really happened between Pam and Jim. I'm so excited that things are finally happening now!

Reviewer: ISayOye Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2008 08:29 am Title: under where?

LKSDLKSDAFLKJSDFLKLKGLKDFGJHWEUJHWKIGIJFDSDASLKJORELKSFLJSDFLKSAFBABIES!

Reviewer: GoJAM Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2008 07:04 pm Title: stains of our past

I was so excited to see an update. I love this story! Great chapter. I can't wait for the next one. Keep them coming! :-)

Reviewer: dancer288 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2008 02:35 pm Title: under where?

aww...yay...loved the date...can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: NiceJammies Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2008 12:51 pm Title: stains of our past

Thanks for the update!  Still loving this story- can't wait for more!

Reviewer: JamFan4000 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2008 09:28 am Title: under where?

Thanks for this next installment. Will be checking frequently for your next one. as my son says: This is gettin' good!

Reviewer: JamesMichael Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2008 08:01 am Title: under where?

Good and long - I like that... that's what she said...

Reviewer: MuteytheMailman Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2008 07:50 am Title: under where?

Still really loving this story. Keep the updates coming!

Reviewer: iwantphillyjim Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2008 06:58 am Title: under where?

LOVE IT, you are the master, GREAT chapter rules!!!!!!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2008 06:05 am Title: under where?

Great chapter.  I love  how they were both so nervous.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2008 06:03 am Title: under where?

Love love love long chapters when they're this good.  Wow.  Italianfood, this was just perfect--sexy and awkward and so well paced.  I, too, hope the next chapter won't take too long.  Wishing you inspiration for those "big things" you have planned : )

Reviewer: Ruby Caspar Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2008 01:44 am Title: under where?

I loved this chapter - I'm so glad they've reconnected! Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Cheeb Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2008 12:45 am Title: under where?

OMG, I can't tell you how happy this chapter made me. Read the whole chapter with a big grin on my face and laughed out loud too. (Not cool because it's after midnight and I have a sleeping child and husband in the house.) Speaking of husbands, mine talks in bed too, and I nod and say uh huh while he speaks when all I want to do is sleep. :) I so love how protective Jim is when it comes to Franny, what with not wanting Kelly anywhere near her! So funny how Jim is behaving himself and Pam just wants to have at him now. I just have to say again how much I love the way these two are written by you, in all of your stories. Am so looking forward to more of this one.

Reviewer: MuteytheMailman Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2008 01:58 pm Title: fall over 7 times, get up 8

I love this! I am following it like a real life, or a separate tv show, or soap opera or something! You've made them so human and it'st just touching to read. Looking forward to more!

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