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Reviewer: krentist Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2008 08:03 pm Title: the idea of tomorrow

Hello!. I love love love your story! I registered here at MTT just so i could tell you that, and that I desperately need to know what happens next!

Author's Response: Ah Krentist! I love your name. I'm glad you registered for little ol' me. Thank you!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03, 2008 02:10 pm Title: the idea of tomorrow

I don't want it to end either!  Really enjoyed this chapter. 

Reviewer: cheezy316 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2008 02:55 pm Title: the idea of tomorrow

I am really enjoying this one- I just found it and I really hope you continue!

Reviewer: MaiaDawn Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2008 10:01 pm Title: the idea of tomorrow

It is absolutely not wrong that you don't want it to end!  Because I don't either!  I haven't commented much, but I have been reading this story and loving it since the beginning!  I will be sad to see it go!!

Reviewer: MintChocolateChip Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2008 09:59 pm Title: the idea of tomorrow

Hah - NO WAY do we want this to end! If that is wrong I don't wanna be right. Thanks for another lovely chapter.

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2008 08:19 pm Title: the idea of tomorrow

Jim hadn’t realized it until just now, but he was raising a female Dwight, and she was his world.

What a cute line!!  I love that Jim took Franny along when he bought Pam's ring.  Nice chapter!  I've been really enjoying your story.

Reviewer: JamesMichael Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2008 07:52 pm Title: the idea of tomorrow

Nope, not wrong that you don't want it to end at all! I say as many more chapters as you want and make em' all outragiously long... please!

This was a great chapter to follow on with the last. It's fun having Franny talk, kind of solidifies the family dynamic in a weird way.

Very cool reference to Francis Bean too... I am presuming you mean little Cobain...?

Keep em' coming and I'll keep reading!

Author's Response: I did mean little Cobain! I just imagined that Creed would have her mixed up with the real Frances Bean because Franny doesn't have a father alive that Creed knows of. I guess that was kind of random.

Reviewer: dancer288 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2008 07:31 pm Title: the idea of tomorrow

i am with ya cause i don't want it to end either...loved it all..loved how he was so nervous on asking if franny could call him dad...can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Iheartstanley Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2008 06:36 pm Title: the idea of tomorrow

No it's not you write a great story!

Reviewer: malaz85 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2008 05:11 pm Title: the idea of tomorrow

I don't want it to end either :( I loved this chapter! Sooooo cute! The Jim and Pam love is back in full swing!

Author's Response: good, you had me kind of worried for a bit.

Reviewer: bobblehead joe Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2008 03:03 pm Title: the idea of tomorrow

I don't want this story to end either!! This is by far the best story I have ever read.

Author's Response: wow, flattery will get you everywhere!

Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2008 02:47 pm Title: the idea of tomorrow

I do love me some good fluff. Okay, I'm not upset with you anymore about the wait for this chapter. You're not the only one that does not want this story to end. So just keep going until Franny goes off to her own Dunder Hall, where she meets a Dwight type. :) This chapter made me all kinds of happy. I love the way you write Dwight. Glad your writer's block is gone. I was stumped as to why Pam was upset when Franny used the word Daddy. Glad you explained why. Can't wait to read Pam's reaction to her "Moon Rock."

Author's Response: Could you imagine what Jim would really do if Franny brought home a Dwight?

Reviewer: elly Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2008 02:26 pm Title: the idea of tomorrow

As I sit here thinking about Phyllis and Stanley's one night stand, I'm suddenly very hungry and I need your help choosing a suitable lunch. Before I forget, my koala is now the proud owner of a monocle!

 

This story? Ehh, it's okay. Just kidding

Reviewer: Iheartstanley Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25, 2008 10:16 pm Title: stains of our past

WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!

Reviewer: malaz85 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21, 2008 01:31 pm Title: women's intuition

I'm not gonna lie...I don't know how I feel about this chapter. It doesn't even seem like they love each other...Jim seems like he's being forced to marry her, and Pam seems like she doesn't care about him. 'Seems' is the key word...I know they love each other, but it's not the same as the way they loved each other before. Am I making any sense?

Don't worry, I'm still going to faithfully read this story, and I can't want to see where their relationship goes.

Author's Response: Ah, really? Hopefuly next chapter their love for each other will be more apparent to you. They are definitely still very much in love but that doesn't mean that they are any less insecure about getting married because they're first marriages didn't end the way either of them would have imagined. Jim doesn't feel like he's being forced to propose, rather, he feels like Pam might finally be ready to get married and that was her way of dropping the hint.

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2008 07:24 pm Title: women's intuition

Wow. That was unexpected but so cool!! I love that Franny is a part of the action now with a personality and everything!

“Can you ask Dwight tomorrow?” Hee hee!

Reviewer: iwantphillyjim Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2008 04:40 pm Title: women's intuition

Italianfood...Why are you the way that you are? Which is completely extra AWESOME. Franny and Jim, oh so sweet. And the sex is always incredibly hot, and not dirty hot, but just hot. I look forward to the ring shopping. Keep up the fabulous work my friend!

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2008 03:59 pm Title: women's intuition

I like the last interchange between Jim & Franny.  Very sweet.

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2008 11:31 am Title: stains of our past

I don't care about any time jumping if you write more like that one.  Loved the talks between Jim/Frannie.  So cute.

Reviewer: dancer288 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2008 11:12 am Title: women's intuition

amazing...love how smart franny is...can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: There will be a lot more Franny in the next chapter!rn

Reviewer: elly Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2008 09:45 am Title: stains of our past

This makes me want to be a single parent so I can find a man who will love me and my bastard child.

I bought rope, bananas, never nudes, and some peanut butter for our upcoming vacation kidnapping of Krasinski!!



Author's Response: I'm glad that my story has inspired you to raise your future child in a broken home. If the finding of an awesome replacement dad doesn't work out I apologize for your stupidity.rnrnrnQuestions: where did you find this never nude? And I see that you said "nudes" as in plural... does that mean you found two? And by Krasinski you mean Buster, right?

Reviewer: Iheartstanley Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2008 08:08 am Title: women's intuition

Great Job You once again leaving me wanting more!

Author's Response: I can hopefully give you more soon.

Reviewer: JamFan4000 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2008 07:17 am Title: women's intuition

Morning nookie was gggooooooooddddd heh-heh! I didn't even think of timeline issues, the story unfolded so well, no no worries. I am getting sad that this story will be coming to a end, but am looking forward to the BIG FINISH.
Consider me warned. (yes, I am baiting you to kick my ass!)

Author's Response: honestly, I really do hope that I can kick your ass.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2008 06:32 am Title: women's intuition

How could I hate this?  Far from it.  You managed to make the story flow while having time elapse.  I appreciate your attention to detail, but to tell you the truth, I wasn't even focusing on the time lapse while Pam was in school.  I was more caught up in other details of the story.  Excellent job with the morning lovin', and I was happy that a pregnancy would result from it.  You conveyed so well how much they love each other.  Finally, really nice job with the relationship between Franny and Jim.  I thoroughly enjoyed this, italianfood. 

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it. I was really nervous about all of the skipping around, but I tend to focus on things that don't matter.

Reviewer: untherapy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2008 02:59 am Title: women's intuition

wow - this was amazing! I am very sincerely in love with this story :) please write more soon! I really love Franny trying to ease in the "daddy" word :P

Author's Response: I'll try to update faster, although faster updates mean less time with this story and I really don't want to let go.

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