Reviews For Crash Landing In The Orifice
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Date: September 10, 2006 10:52 am Title: Crash Landing in the Orifice
Date: September 10, 2006 10:52 am Title: Crash Landing in the Orifice
Cute. You have a couple of sentences in the middle that switch to third person (referring to Pam as "she" instead of "I"), but otherwise this is a good start.